God's Blessing in disguise


I am getting

tired of you,

I think I have

put up with you

for too long!

You are not

what you were,

You smile

but there is pretence,

You talk

but your mind

travels somewhere,

You hold my hand,

It’s cold.

Your grip,

So loose!

You are not frank,

You hide.

You look

but there is no depth.

You kiss,

there is no warmth.

There is no point

wasting time

unnecessarly.

Let us say

Goodbye

and find

our own ways.

No hard feelings,

no misunderstanding

anymore.

The damage you have done

is beyond repairs,

And in any case

repaired things

don’t last long.

You are You,

I am Me,

Our thoughts

don’t match

anymore.

Probably

our separation

will be

God’s Blessing

in disguise.






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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem indeed. I can imagine him being fed-up with some many people now. Awesome and up my friend


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Great poem with a good message. There is no point trying to plug a dam with a cork, if the floods are going to happen anyway.

Sad and a shame it just wasn't right.


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gmwilliams 5 years ago from the Greatest City In The World-New York City, New York

I love it-sometimes in order to grow, we must separate and move on!


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Writer20 - Thank you so much my Friend for your visit and comment. You have always been so kind and supportive and most of the time you are the first to comment. I appreciate that very much. Hearing from you is always a matter of great delight to me.

Hope you are all keeping well. Have a Very Good Week end.

Best Wishes.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Rosemay50 - Many thanks for stopping by and posting your comment. 'There is no point trying to plug a dam with a cork, if the floods are going to happen anyway.' - you have so nicely said and that's true.

Hope things are all well at your end. Have a very good weekend.

Best Wishes.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@ gmwilliams - Many thanks or reading the poem. Yes you are right, sometimes separation is a must to move on!

Have a good week end and take care.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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AmaTainted 5 years ago from Texas

awesome and up for me as well.


Vanessa McKay 5 years ago

An insightful expression of moving on and away from a dead relationship.

Its beautiful and up from me.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@Ana Tainted -Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. I am now curious to read your hubs and this I shall do very shortly.

Have a good week end.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@Vanessa Mckay - Thanks a lot for stopping by and posting your comment. It's very kind of you and I appreciate very much. I shall be reading your hubs and you can soon expect to have my comments too

Have a very good weekend and take care.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Sometimes this is the right and only decision to make. But we hold on because we are afraid, or comfortable or don't know what else to do. I know, been there and done that.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Thanks a lot for your visit and comment. So very kind of you my Friend!

Best Wishes.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

That's it, over! it sure does sound final!

Wonderful piece of work my friend, I loved it and voting up.

Best wishes kamalesh, take care MM


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Hi MM, So lovely to hear from you again and I am happy that you have liked the poem. Thanks for your continued support, my dear Friend.

Take care. Best Wishes,

Kamalesh

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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia

votes up! It shows how things can change in love. As we all grow older, our likes/dislikes change and sometimes are feelings do as well. This is keeping it real. Wonderful poem. :) Sorry haven't been over in awhile. I hate missing these good poems! Take care.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

So nice to hear from you my Friend.I am very happy that you have liked the poem. Thanks a lot for your visit and comment. Much appreciated. I am also sorry I haven't been able to visit you for quite sometime. Anyway I must make my visit soon and you can expect to have my comments too.

Take care.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh

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