God's Perfect Creation

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God's Perfect Creation

by John Hansen (c) 2014


When God created woman

He sculptured her with care.

He planned each minute detail

Of body, face, and hair.


He gave her intuition,

Personality, and grace.

One act of disobedience

Left Eve in His disgrace.


God reworked through His master plan

A million days and nights.

On the day that you were born

He put the matter right.


You are the perfect woman,

God's ultimate creation.

Your kindness, warmth, intelligence,

Fills me with elation.


I know that I'm not worthy

To spend my life with you,

But I dedicate my every breath

To be devoted, loyal, and true.


God Made Woman- Keith Urban

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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Voted:

Useful as a reminder

Funny as to what a fool I am

Awesome as your words fill me

Beautiful as your words fill me with my two daughters, wife, sisters and mother.

Amen to your words. God says what we speak and write is that which overflows from our heart. What a great heart you have!!


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mckbirdbks 2 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

This is a sterling tribute to womanhood. Your hub is nicely decorated.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for the vote across the board Eric. What more could I ask for, and your kind comments fills this heart of mine.

Thank you for reading mckbirdbks, I appreciate your generous comments. Womanhood deserves a tribute now and then.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Your words are stunning and heartfelt and truly glorify our Lord God for He knew man needed woman indeed. I am speechless at the beauty of this tribute here.

Up and more and sharing

God bless you and your beautiful wife,

Faith Reaper


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you so much for those touching words Faith. Much appreciated. God bless you too.


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Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

John these are word a wife lives to hear but few do, you have a very lucky wife. God has blessed you both. Who could ask for anything more. ^+


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Jackie, your kind words are much appreciated.


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word55 2 years ago from Chicago

Goodness! Jodah, A great poem, She is absolutely God's greatest perfection. Ok ladies, you can't say, we guys don't recognize and honor you...


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks word55, guess I can say I wrote it on behalf of all the guys on HP. Thanks for your great comment.


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

I know that I'm not worthy

To spend my life with you,

But I dedicate my every breath

To be devoted, loyal, and true.

The beauty of your warm thoughts says it all.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Devika, your words mean a lot.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

Your wife is a lucky woman to be cherished and appreciated the way you do. Dedicating a poem to her is a beautiful way to show your love.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Shauna, she deserves it.


Mklow1 2 years ago

Devoted husband and devoted dad. These are admirable qualities in a person. Great poem.


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Beautifuly said and funny! Any wife will appreciate devoted, loyal, and true love. Good for you to be all that for your wife and I am sure she appreciates it. I know that I am lucky enough to have that with my husband :-)

Have a wonderful weekend!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Good to see you Mklow1, your kind comments are much appreciated.

Hi Joelle, thank you, and glad you have a great relationship also.


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

True words, John! We men are just damn lucky to be walking in their footsteps.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

I can't imagine the world without their common sense and calming influence Bill. Thanks for reading.


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

A beautiful poem. I'm sure your wife is very honored that you wrote such beautiful words about her. A fabulous tribute. Voted up and more, plus shared.


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

Sentiments of love beautifully expressed. Excellent!


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suzettenaples 2 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful tribute to women! We are quite nice!


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bluebird 2 years ago

Your expression is perfect and flawless - it fits the subject of the poem perfectly!

Great job! I look forward to more!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

I apologise for having to group my replies, as there are no separate reply buttons on comments at the moment.

@Flourish. She did like the poem. Thanks for the vote up and share.

@MsDora, Thanks for your kind comment.

@suzette, Yes you are very nice :)

@bluebird, Thanks for reading this. I appreciate your generous comment.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is a beautiful tribute to your wife! I love reading your poetry..Thank you..


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you always exploring, it's appreciative readers like you who inspire me to write more.


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Pamela99 2 years ago from United States

This is such a beautiful poem and the words are just amazing. Your wife is a lucky woman. Your poetry is so beautiful and I always read it more than once.


MysticMoonlight 2 years ago

This is beautiful, Jodah! As always, your work is amazing. Well done. Voted and sharing!

And, the Human Angels Facebook picture is STUNNING!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Pamela, that is a great compliment to hear that you always read my poetry more than once. Thank you.

Thank you Mystic for your kind comment, vote up and share. I love that picture too. Human Angels have some amazing ones.


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AliciaC 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

You have created a wonderful tribute to your wife, Jodah. Your poem is a beautiful way to honour her!


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

God blessed you bro :)


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Alicia, we have to show our love and appreciation as best we can. She did like this poem.

Thank you Frank, your comments are always encouraging.


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midget38 2 years ago from Singapore

A wonderfully sensitive tribute to us women!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you midget, yes it is meanrt be a tribute to both my wife and all women in general. Thank you for reading.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A very beautiful poem and thanks for sharing Jodah.

Here's to wishing you a great weekend.

Eddy.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Eddy, you have a great weekend too.


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tobusiness 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Jodah, a beautiful poem in praise of womanhood..you've found the way to a woman's heart. Have a wonderful weekend, my best to you.


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Fabulous poem and tribute to women. Women rock!

Excellent KU video! I had no idea this song existed, I thought I've heard every one of Keith's songs (as least 100x each). Thank you for sharing the video. KU rocks!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Jo, It's the least I could do. There have been some wonderful women in my life. Thanks for your kind comment, enjoy your weekend too.

Hi Sunshine, thanks for your great comment. Glad you like Keith Urban too and this song was new to you. He grew up and went to school in Caboolture, 20 minutes from where I lived. My brother went to the same school and was one grade below.


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Lucky you and your brother!!


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Shyron E Shenko 2 years ago

Jodah, thank you for such a beautiful tribute to women. I love your poem, it is amazing.

Voted up UABI and shared.

God Bless you.

Shyron


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Wow Shyron, what lovely comments. Thank you so much for reading and the vote ups as well. Have a good day, God bless.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

We can't think of beauty, grace and love without thinking first about woman. Whatever was written, is being written and will be written about woman is akin to writing on pages of eternity and so infinite are words and infinite are ways to express feelings. John, though your poem is simple and sweet yet is very profound in it's depth and import. In every avatar, be it mother, sister, wife or sister, woman is a great phenomenon ! Great writing. I also enjoyed the sweet song. Voted up.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Good to get your insightful comment Harishprasad. I agree with everything you say. Thank you for the vote up too.


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teaches12345 2 years ago

This is so touching and beautiful!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for reading teaches, your kind comment is greatly appreciated.


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Jodah. A lovely hub all round. We men must have something...don't we....? LOL.

Graham.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hey Graham, yes we certainly must..lol. Thank you for reading.


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annart 2 years ago from SW England

How beautiful this is and what a lovely tribute to your lady! It takes a good man to write such a thing though! Ann


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Ann! *Blushing* at the "good man" part.


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Monis Mas 2 years ago

What a beautiful poem. Absolute perfection! So easy to to read, understand and absorb.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks you for your kind words Monis Mas. I try to make most of my poetry easy to understand because it usually has a message to convey.


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Aneegma 2 years ago

On behalf of all women that have read this I can confidently say WE ALL WANT TO KILL YOUR WOMAN AND REPLACE HER WITH US!!! LOL Such a wonderful poem, very sweet and elegant and lovely. If all men cherished us like this they would be complete peace on earth. Well done.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Wow! Aneegma, I am speechless..well almost. Thank you for that compliment. I am blushing. I won't show my woman this comment..haha. I do believe us men often don't appreciate our women, all women enough, so this is my tribute to you all. :)

Have a great night or day, wherever you are in the Universe.


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parrster 2 years ago from Oz

Gotta agree, I love the woman in my life and am constantly reminded of the blessings they bring. Great poem. Voted up and beautiful.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for the kind comment parrster, where would man be without good women?


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rebeccamealey 2 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Lovely! A sweet poem to someone very lucky!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you so much Rebecca.


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blondey 18 months ago

It's nice to have a spiritual aspect, and nice tribute to your woman. I love how country singers are Christians, I am a "devout" one myself. Thanks


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Jodah 18 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks again Blondey. Yes, you are right, country singers do seem to have a high percentage of Christians among them.


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yecall 10 months ago from California

Beautiful poem! I just love it. Also, the visuals you have chosen to accompany it are lovely.


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Jodah 10 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Yecall, thank you for that very generous comment. I am glad you like this hub.

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