A Good Girl

by you-did/flickr
by you-did/flickr

I suppose you’ve always been there
I took no note
eyes down cast
nary a sideways glance
smiles monitored
hands, hips, sway, retained
curves restrained
impulses damper-ed down
senses bridled
desires strangled
a good
a very good girl

I see you now
from under a fringe
of curling eye lashes
glinting smiles
sparkling eyes
broad shoulders
hungry looks
gazes up and down
advances, despite the rock
and worst
the pull
the energetic pull

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MissJamieD 7 years ago from Minnes-O-ta

This is beautiful! Great job:)


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

Is this a case of a good girl gone bad? Or I toatally missed the hoodwinking? Anyway, this is cool, RB! Thanks for sharing :D


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Miss Jamie!

I wouldn't say "bad" Cris.  Just awakened.  Bad could be around the corner, but that chapter of my life hasn't been written yet.


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AEvans 7 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

hungry looks? What a great poem Randy and perfectly written.:)


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

I have seen her I think. I like her. A very feeling piece that speaks clearly. Nicely done!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm sure you've seen the "hungry look" of men AEvans!  I'm glad you liked the poem.

 

You've seen the good girl Chris and like her?  She left when she read your vampire piece tonight, I can tell you that!


badcompany99 7 years ago

Trust me Bad is always around the corner. Great poem and the photo just compliments it, I bet you spent ages getting a photo to match those words, you are a perfectionist. Enjoy yer day moi Randy lil friend !


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Peter Dickinson 7 years ago from South East Asia

I think I know this girl. Thanks...enjoyed your observations.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Bad its midnight here. I'm about to turn into a pumpkin. I like to say "detail oriented." Cheers.

Greetings Peter, nice to meet you.


badcompany99 7 years ago

Its 8am here and Bad is about to start another day at the office. Congrats on hitting 100 fans btw, dont stay up too late moi friend, right I am off to do some work.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

You have a fabulous day BC, I have vampires to go dream about. :) Thanks on the 100, how the hell did that happen? The real me has been here twice as long and doesn't have that many??


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Mighty Mom 7 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

I love this!! It captures so perfectly that subtle but palpable shift when sensuality is awakened and a woman's sexual energy (the energetic pull) gets turned on (no pun intended there).

My favorite line -- oh boy, have I lived this one, too! -- "advances, despite the rock."


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Mighty Mom for "getting me." :) I'm gonna wear the rock for a while. Cause I'm not ready for the... onslaught.


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Mighty Mom 7 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

I hear ya. It's all nice, naughty fun here on HP. Out in the real world, there's no Hub Pages Police:-)! Yeah, you keep that rock handy. You might just need to smack some punk across the face with it!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

LOL! I got asked out by a twenty... sevenish guy last week. I didn't giggle, but I wanted to. I almost could have been his mother.


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Mighty Mom 7 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

I don't doubt that for a minute. You are a MILF. Wear it proudly!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I just learned what that meant. Too funny. So, I'll take that as a compliment.


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Elena. 7 years ago from Madrid

Nice read, Randy, and congrats on the funky medal :-*

BTW, I learned about MILF last week, never ever heard the expression before. I was shocked, shocked I tell you, to learn what it meant! Laugh!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Elena, not as shocked as I, to be one!


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Elena. 7 years ago from Madrid

Yeah, you're defnitely on the tougher end of that bargain! :-) Then again, I think you can be proud of it and take it as a big compliment! I'll never know myself, but I tend to think being a MILF ought to be good for one's ego! :-)


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Jewels 7 years ago from Australia

Firstly, you passed the space behind this piece, really liked it.

Secondly, could you PM me on THAT acronym. Please!


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Elena. 7 years ago from Madrid

Jewels, check out the comment section of this hub:

http://hubpages.com/entertainment/Seduction-in-a-C...

Randy, sorry to be trolling on your space!


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Hawkesdream 7 years ago from Cornwall

loved your poem, we all wake up sooner or later don't we.


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cindyvine 7 years ago from Kyiv, Ukraine

Enjoyed the poem, Randy girl


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Tom Rubenoff 7 years ago from United States

Love your style. Nerve endings are all right out there. Good girl! LOL


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Jewels 7 years ago from Australia

Thanks Elena, I googled it!


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kea 7 years ago

Nicely done!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

If you mean Jewels, I left the good girl behind, I suppose I have.  And you figured out the "mother I'd like to f..." by now.  It's a compliment, albeit a crass one.  Sorry I went to bed and left you hanging.

Hawk I'm glad you like it.  I guess we do.

Thanks Cindy, I'm glad you came in.


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Lgali 7 years ago

This is beautiful! I enjoyed the poem


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh good Tom, I got to your nerve endings! I did my job eh?

Thank You Kea, I'm glad you like it. :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I can always count on you Lgali.


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

MILF's rock!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Your cult is full of them, eh Chris?


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

Is not, never was, won't be a cult...now, about tonight's meeting...


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh riiiiight. I meant harem.


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MellasViews 7 years ago from Earth

this is damn good work here Randy! lol..and I agree with Christopher... MILFS rock!!! lol. ; )


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hey thanks Mella. There are a lot of MILFs around here. Not that I'd like to f'em, just that they are f'able. Ah, damn you know what I mean.


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Pete Maida 7 years ago

So much said with so few words.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

That is the goal of poetry, no? I hope you liked it.


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trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

Rockin! Your flow is awsome!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ahhhh, thanks Trooper. That is a nice comment. :)


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mayhmong 7 years ago from North Carolina

c'mon people, nothing wrong with being a good girl! Well, in some cases...


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh May, I think one should be a good girl if one is married. But not to the point of not living and experiencing life.


ColdWarBaby 7 years ago

Good and bad are relative, sometimes. They're relatives all the time.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm finding it very good to be bad :)


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blondepoet 7 years ago from australia

Hi Randy looking good as ever. I see myself in this poem. Indeed.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

And you as well Blonde! I think its high time to stop being good, what about you?


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blondepoet 7 years ago from australia

Amen to that Randy wooo hooo.

There was a little girl, who had a little curl. When she was good, she was very good, but when she was bad she was better. LMAO


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Here's to having curls and knowing what to do with them ;)


badcompany99 7 years ago

I like a girl with curls, nice red flowing curls : )


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Just dyed mine strawberry again... does that count?


badcompany99 7 years ago

Strawberry oh yeah, not only the colour but the taste, methinks good girl is an apt description for the Randy Behaviour !


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WhiskeyChick 7 years ago from North of Somewhere

So perfectly said. Love the form.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you for the compliment WhiskeyChick. I've been enjoying your stuff a lot.


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lxxy 7 years ago from Beneath, Between, Beyond

"nary a sideways glancesmiles monitored"

Nice..nary, not often used today! =D Your word paint is most beautiful and consuming.

luv,

lxxy


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oooooh, "word paint," I love that. Thanks for reading Ixxy, and thanks for the word "consuming." I like that too!


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floeticpoet 7 years ago

Great poem! I love the words you used. You should come read my poetry sometime.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

So glad you like, and I will!


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Earthscribe 7 years ago from Tampa, Florida

Ah the veiled dance beneath lash, behind hip, within blood and bone! Such a good girl to have embraced the truth of energetic pull!

How could he resist?


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Earthscribe thanks for the fun comment. Mmmm, he can't.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Despite the rock, huh? If the female was the married one, it's interesting to note that her senses were "bridled." Ha -- get it: bridled. Bride-eld. Ha ha ha ha ha --- ha... er, ha... (awkward pause).

Anyway, this vividly visits a common theme you explore: that of hidden or averted sexual tension. You're very good at pinpointing the nuances of this phenomenon.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I laughed out loud at your awkward pause, really.

Even though I wore my ring after my divorce, I guess I felt different and the world could tell. Maybe because I looked up?

Yes I suppose this is Randy's theme. The reason I created her.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Well, then the pause doesn't feel so awkward -- unless you were laughing AT me!

A glance can say it all...

Either way, I'm glad you created her. She's honest and knows what she wants in life. If only more people could be like her.

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