Goodbye Burdens

Goodbye Burdens

Goodbye Burdens

Goodbye to my burdens & pain
I've carried you around with nothing to gain.
You've broken me down
Pinning my soul to the ground
While I was unable to make a sound

Wanting to cry out with shame
With no one but myself to blame
Holding it deep inside
Running fast to push it aside
Waiting for the day that I could confide

Goodbye to my burdens & pain
I can now start to explain
Peace of mind I will finally obtain
No longer will I be held by this chain
A new beginning I will now attain

GOODBYE TO MY BURDENS & PAIN

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seasoning 6 years ago

i was thinking of what to say in my comment, i was going to say you have a new beginning, but you said it yourself in your last line..... enjoy, and don't look back....


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Good one! :)


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Lisa Petrarca 6 years ago Author

Thank you Seasoning & Freya...I'm almost at the end of a 19 year ordeal. God is good!


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Ann Nonymous 6 years ago from Virginia

Perhaps I was never overly fond of poetry because either I could not understand it or I could not relate to it. But what you have written here is, although short, very touching and to the point. May God bless you for breaking the chains and sharing this moment with us!!!!!


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James A Watkins 6 years ago from Chicago

I very much enjoyed reading your poem. I am right there with you. This is expressive and well done. Thank you for sharing your art.


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kenneth avery 4 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

1/2/2012 Happy New Year, Lisa!

I voted UP and Away on this hub. LOVED IT. Every syllable. I want to tell you that I admire your writing. God has been good to gift you in this and all other areas of your life. I am honored to follow. And I invite YOU to check my hubs if you want a good laugh. And I sincerely Invite you to follow me. I would love that. Sincerely,

Kenneth Avery

from Hamilton, a northwest Alabama town that

looks a bit like Mayberry on the Andy Griffith Show.

I will be looking for you.

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