Got The Lowdown Jacuzzi Blues........

It's been a long day's night
and I'm broken down in pain
Seems the kind of work I do do......
is catching up again

My truck pulls into the yard
my day ends in the drive
And often .........as I crawl out of my
truck I thank God I'm alive

So I grab a beer and a swig or two
Ok ....begin catching a buzz
And with the mentality of a drone
I open another just because

Ok ....so it's tasting pretty good ...this beer
.......think I'll just have another
Before I realize what I've done
My body begins to bother

Yes sweety....... go ahead and fill the tub
just
for me .......
Like it or not .....here I go .......hit the jets
and lie on back ....set that tension free

Wouldn't you know it the storm has arrived
And the tubby begins to sour
Thats what happens when you jump in the Jacuzzi
when the whole town loses power








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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Ahahaha! That would totally be my luck!


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

What an experience. thank you


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Ed, I don't know if I'm supposed to find pleasure or pain here? :D Is there a deeper meaning, Ed? See, you've got me thinking now! ... lol and when I do too much of it; it hurts... lol. But the poem doesn't... I love it, of course.

Hugs,

Cat


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

you are a funny guy .. love your witty style


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W1totalk 3 years ago

Good stuff ahorseback. I miss the jacuzzi.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Gosh I love you guys !

Cat --there's only pleasure found in hot tubs !

Micheal , Thank you kind sir !

Mhatter - Nice to see you my friend !

Shan darlin ! It actually happened to me !

W1totalk, Thank you !


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Aw, well then, grab your sweetie for a back rub next time it happens!


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Shan Hey girl , Okay , if you say so lol......


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

I do say so. Even a jacuzzi can't beat a good back rub.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Shan , My wife set me up with a big female masseuse one time who just loved to hurt me , I think she was jealous of me and my wife ! It would fix my back problems but she was a big mean woman !......lol


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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

Wishing I had a Jacuzzi. :(


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Nikki a nice swim in the water with the one of your dreams will suffice !LOL.....Ed


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Maybe your wife nust had to set you straight. ;-) hehe actually, that's the kind of massage I prefer. But a soothing rub is very relaxing.


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Joy56 3 years ago

wish I could stretch that far......... again I just love the photo..... it so suits the mood, of this little story, poem, whatever you want it to be. I suspect life is very different where you live than it is over here.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Hi joy , Come on over , I'll show you the view and loan you the Jacuzzi!..LOL.....ED


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Oh Joy come on you can stretch ! ....LOL......:-}


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Joy56 3 years ago

I wish......


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

LOL..........Hug for you !

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