Great Sorrow

Some are fierce as others are small

It torn the palm tree down for spite

And tried to vex the blue with all its might


The white-crested waves crash to shore

Gray sky spark with lightning

---sung with a clash, bangs, and roar


Gulls circle the sky like white flakes sailing

It screech a high pitch cry----so mournful

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Very profound. thank you


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Can feel the sadness.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Deep, very deep, thank you.


KryssiNykki 2 years ago

i loved your use of imagery - i could see it as much as i felt it. good work :)

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