Grumpy

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Grumpy

Grumpy was a gator
at the pond across the street,

an ostentatious fellow
who had an appetite for meat.

Grumpy was the silent type
he wasn't much for talk...

rather than conversation
he preferred to walk the walk.

And he was always hungry,
for he had a hollow leg...

He was a native poacher,
not inclined or prone to beg.

Now, Grumpy was the moody sort,
not much to socialize...

and liked to isolate each day
an element of surprise...

He lurked within the waters
of the friendly little pond...

and often went unnoticed
until he would abscond...

with a meaty little morsel
of an unsuspecting snatch,

vanishing to savor
his tasty, squirmy catch!

I used to go a walking
along that friendly little shore...

Until I saw a notice that was
posted on my door.

For I would be a delicate and
more than tasty treat

and Grumpy would be tantalized
by my ample, tender meat...

So here I sit and tell this tale
a warning with a clue...

If you dare to wander there,
Grumpy could eat you!





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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

No-Clue, did my old man sit for you when you composed these words? lol Perfect discription. Very funny and loved it.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Great work, and would make a fine children's poem.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

No, star, it wasn't your old man...actually it is a true story, there is a pond across the street from where I live with my son and he told me about a notice posted about a gator over there...and I was told to avoid the pond or be dinner! I just gave him a name! Thanks for the visit! Hugs!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you WillStarr! I so appreciate it!


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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

Very interesting write,No_Clue...especially because it's true! Great Job!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

ATTYs weed! It was a fun write, though true...wont be visiting the pond any more!


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

That lightened the mood. Reminds me of an old man who used to keep our ball when it went into his garden when we played as kids.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Spirit Whisperer, Thanks! I liked to take my grandson for walks over to that little pond...but my son informed me that a notice was posted about a gator over there and I won't be visiting Grumpy any time soon! Florida has its share of gators...and I have no desire to feed Grumpy today! Hugs!


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Brilliantly funny, thanks No_Clue :-)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

mum, I am so glad you liked this! Thanks!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Barb H! I am glad!


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

No Clue,

Very cute and funny..great poem..I'm from south Ga originaly and gators are something you don't mess with lol

Thanks for sharing,

Sunnie


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Sunnie Day, I have never come face to face with a gator, and live in Central Florida, where I have spent most of my life...and I'm not up for trying now...Grumpy can have the pond...! Thanks for the read and comment! Hugs!


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

lol I remember going to the lake and we could see them crossing the road. Too close for me..lol..I agree let Grumpy have his old pond,,,

Hugs back at ya.

Sunnie


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thanks, Sunnie!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

This was brilliant No_Clue I loved the rhyme used it was a sing a long song :D

smiles :)

bella


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, bella, I appreciate your visit!


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Vickie Bovender 5 years ago from Southeastern US

I love this! Your poetry is contagious. :)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Again, thanks so much, Vickie! I appreciate you!


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Maggie-May 5 years ago from the Island of Cape Breton to the Eastern Shores near Halifax, NS

Nice poem,...gators, scary..I've watched a few documentaries about them and seen their behaviours on the discovery channel, not my cup of tea to live anywhere near them, best of wishes & be safe,

MM


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Maggie-May, I'm not overly fond of gators either, but they are a fact of life here in Florida...so I don't go to the friendly little pond across the street any more...gator-wrestling is NOT on my "bucket list"!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

gator meat is tasty. serves them right!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

PDX, I have heard that said...and I am sure Grumpy would find me tasty too...I'm not about to tempt fate on this one! Thank you for your visit!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

no problem. Deep fry some gator, add some cajun seasoning and dip it in shrimp sauce for a tasty snack :-)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

LOL cuteness! Marsha, that was so loving, Mr.Grumpy sounds adorable in your poem =) Tender meat... LOL priceless!


No_Clue 4 years ago

I haven't met Grumpy face to face, but I'm told he is about. Logan and I don't venture over there often, I'm not up for being an 'ordeurve! Thanks, Max!

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