Headin' To Tucson


By: Wayne Brown

The cold, steel latch handle of the box car sliding door is covered with a coating of ice and slips in his hand as he cracks the door open to look inside. It’s empty and looks sufficient to shelter him from the weather for a while longer. He swings his old duffel bag up on to the floor and crawls in behind it. Although there is no heat in the idle rail car, it feels much warmer to him than the outdoor exposure. As they say, ‘any port in a storm’ and this one would fill the bill for a night’s sleep assuming the rail-yard cops didn’t disrupt his stay.

He should already be in Tucson but he had been distracted and sidetracked since the medication ran out. Winter had caught up with him here on this Fort Worth track siding. He had been working his way south from Tulsa trying to stay ahead of the cold. It had finally caught up with him in the form of an ice storm that was blanketing much of north Texas. He had not anticipated the ice but then again, what difference did it really make. He had two choices; head south then westbound or stay up on the northern rail routes, the latter definitely not the best selection. He was just glad to be out of the sleet and freezing temperatures for the night. His stomach growled registering the two days he had now gone without food or water. That must be a priority for the morning. He needed sleep and time to think before he figured out the next leg of his journey west. Shoving the duffel bag together with a few pieces of cardboard that he found on the car floor, he lay down giving in quickly to the exhaustion and glad to be just a little warmer. He falls asleep listening to the persistent tapping of the sleet against the top and sides of the railcar.


Morning comes much too quickly with small traces of sunlight peeking through the cracks around the railcar door. The air is now crisp inside the railcar after the night chill down and his breathe registers foggily in the surrounding air. His priorities are very clear for the day, food and transportation. No doubt, the decision process is very clear when one is operating in the lowest levels of survival…food and shelter. His stomach hurts and cries out for him to fill the hunger first. He agrees, slides back the railcar door, and slips out dragging his duffel behind him. There is still ice about but the sun seems to be warming the day. Things are looking up a bit.

The tattered and stained tan canvas coveralls that he wears are insulated for winter use. He has found them in a dumpster outside Kansas City. One of the back pockets is ripped a bit but that is fine. The old coveralls with their flannel-lined insides are a lot warmer than anything else he has in his bag. He is warm but not warm enough. He is never warm enough and he never seems to be welcome very long in any place where it is warm enough. He has learned that from experience. He has been asked to ‘move on’ more times than he can count. He’d quit counting anything anyway. It don’t make any difference anymore. He crosses over the various tracks with his duffel strap over his shoulder walking up the grassy hill near the track siding to the row of buildings sitting up near the road. His hands and lips are chapped from the wind and cold. Maybe he can do something about that once he gets to Tucson.

A dumpster sits against the wall at the rear of one of the buildings. Based on the smell in the air, someone is cooking breakfast nearby. Dropping the duffel next to the dumpster, he flips the dumpster lid back and looks in hoping to see something that could salve his hunger. He has long since lost his affinity for the dumpster environment. Hunger drives one past that level rapidly. His eyes search about scanning for any morsel of food that he can reach. More times than not, a dumpster would yield some nourishment that was reasonably fresh especially if the dumpster was situated near any place serving or selling food items. The smell of breakfast in the air confirms this dumpster as a good prospect. He continues to search the inside of the dark dumpster with his eyes hoping for a bite to eat.


A door on the back of the building makes a rasping sound as it quickly opens causing him to pull back from the dumpster opening. A man clad in a white apron steps outside quickly spotting him standing by the dumpster. The man, possibly a cook, looks directly at him for a few seconds then turns and heads back inside. Based on past experience, it is best to give up his search and move on before the police arrive. He grabs the strap of the duffel and begins to walk toward the end of the building heading for the alley leading to the road. The door opens again and the apron-clad man steps out holding out a brown paper bag in his direction. He stops, turns and looks into the man’s eyes, kind eyes that seem to speak to him. He reaches out and takes the paper sack and tries to say ‘thank you’ through his cracked, dried lips. No words come forth, he can only nod. The apron man seems to understand and tips his hand to his forehead in a small salute-like move. The man steps back through the door again gone like a short dream as the door slams behind him.

Too hungry, he moves back behind the dumpster and sits down on his duffel to examine the contents of the paper bag. Opening the brown rolled top of the bag, he gazes in seeing a small carton of milk, two cinnamon rolls, and some scramble eggs rolled in a tortilla. The smell rushes forth from the bag filling his nostrils rapidly. Tearing at the edges of the sack, he exposes the food and begins to eat with both his hands full of rolls. By the time he moves to the tortilla, he has gained some control over his hunger and slows a bit. He opens the milk carton and drinks slowly feeling the cool nourishment of the milk as it flows over his parched lips and tongue. He can sense the thankfulness of his body as the food hits its mark. Along the way, people like the ‘apron man’ have shown up in his life when he needed it most just as it had happened today. Maybe there was a God.

Finishing off the last few crumbs trapped in the corners of the paper sack, he tosses it into the dumpster and quickly follows it with the empty milk carton. The wind is picking up speed now from the north and it begins to send a chill into the thickness of his coveralls. It is time to move back toward the railcar and get out of this wind. He needs to get to Tucson but maybe today is not the best time to try it. The sun will surely melt the remaining ice and offer a warmer day tomorrow. Maybe he best move back to the warmth and shelter of the railcar and wait things out one more day. The thought occurs that he should have saved one of the rolls for later. It is too late to think about that now. He will just have to hope to see apron man again tomorrow he thinks as he descends the grassy slope back toward the tracks and the warmth of the box car. Crawling back inside, he curls up on the cardboard hugging the duffel close to his face. It is early in the day but he is already tired and needs to rest, to sleep, to get ready for tomorrow, ready to catch a ride headed westbound, westbound for the warmth of Tucson. Sleep returns quickly as he plans the next day and the next steps of the journey.

The north winds make a whistling sound as they blow through the roof railings between the rotating emergency lights of the security vehicle. As the vehicle stops beside the empty railcar sitting on the siding, two men exit with guns and flashlights. They go about their tasks almost robotically charged with securing the railcars and preventing their use by vagrants transiting the area. This stop is one of many they have made over the course of the night working in the bitter cold to discharge the unwanted humanity from the shelter of the cars. One of them slides back the door of the car while the other covers him and illuminates the inside walls with his flashlight beam. The beam scans back and forth about the inside and finally comes to rest on a motionless hulk over in one corner. Climbing into the car, one of them approaches, examines the vagrant, then turns to the other signaling with a nod to indicate that the body is lifeless and cold. He calls out to his partner, “get on the radio and 911 for a morgue pickup…this one’s gone.” The officer then stands up shining his light down at the lifeless face lying against the surface of the old duffel bag and says, “I don’t know where you were heading mister, but Fort Worth’s the end of the line for you.”

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Stan Fletcher 6 years ago from Nashville, TN

Wayne, this one really sucked me in. Like the first chapter of a great book. You have a gift my friend. This is so much better than most of what I find on Hubpages. Keep writing. I am sure you will continue to grow your audience. You really should write a book if you haven't already.

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sunflowerbucky 6 years ago from Small Town, USA

You absolutely should write a book! You have an amazing talent and a fantastic writing voice. It is very seldom that I come across a hub in which I am not only willing, but compelled to read through to the end. Looking forward to reading more of your material as time allows! Thanks to Stan for pointing this talent out to me!

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breakfastpop 6 years ago

What a powerful and moving story. You have a gift, that is for certain. Welcome to hubpages, you are a most welcome addition. Bravo!

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Shadesbreath 6 years ago from California

Good sense of scene around the dumpster, particularly focused with the apron man's gesture, the salute. It's nice to see people putting creative writing up on HP. It needs stories to balance out the commercial stuff.

halldor 6 years ago

Nice writing, I was in a hobo stage many years back, seem like you lived it yourself

groovygruver 6 years ago

Excellent hub, Wayne. I thoroughly enjoyed the story line. I especially liked the "apron clad man." He is who I want to be.

I'm certain much of your appeal comes from the fact that you're from TEXAS! Count me in as a fellow Texan!

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psychicdog.net 6 years ago

It made me feel sad - I hope the world isn't this cruel and apathetic of life.

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas Author

Thanks to everyone for the wonderful feedback. This story came to me much like a good song comes to a songwriter...really quick and it just flowed. It seemed like I was more at times that I was the instrument as opposed to the creator. I don't get those moments that often but when i do, they are sweet and I will try to share them with you. Thanks for your support and encouragement!

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Winsome 6 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

Smoothly written, dimensioned characters, the right touch of tension and a sad, but good twist at the end. Makes me feel like I've had a satisfying four course meal. Thanks for sharing your gift.

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PabstPenrose 6 years ago from Dardenne Prairie , Missouri

Man, I didn't see the end coming at all. This is a great story. In my stories, I still haven't mastered the art of putting a lot of detail into my surroundings in what not. I've only been writing or about two years now, but I have come a long way.

A buddy of mine who writes a lot of short stories got me into it, and now I write more than he does. The girls I run into now, still say "I have a way with words." But I can't always put them into what I'm writting. Great story, I'll have to look into the rest next time I have a minute.

By the way, you look like Dwight Yoakam, kind of. Haha.

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas Author

You certainly do have a way with words, Brett. In creative type writing, that becomes your core or center line that keeps you out of the ditches. Do not lose that or let anyone talk you out of it in a trade for structure, form, and discipline. Many do not have that sense and have to rely on training rather than instinct. Understand the emotion and impact that you want to establish with the reader and it your words work to that point. Give the reader credit for his imagination and use the power of suggestion as opposed to all out detail to create mental pictures. In this story, I suggest situations to the reader and they create it (box car, cold, ice, sleet). Getting caught up in the tedious detail of a description can rob you of your story and put the reader in a box as well. Impact is more difficult. In this story, since I had not been homeless I had to find something to show that destitution to the reader. The search for food in the dumpster allowed me to set the tone. Regarding outcome, my sister tells me that is the part that makes my stories most interesting…they don’t always follow the readers projected events. I tend to write outcomes as they happen as opposed to planning them before hand. In this particular story, there are readers who finish it believing the homeless character and the dead man are not the same person. In their mind, the homeless man of the story is on his way to Tucson. That's okay...not necessarily that I intended that but it's okay. By the way, I happen to like Yoakum so thanks for the compliment and the kind words on the story!

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Stampdad 6 years ago from Calgary, Alberta

I liked this a lot. Very interesting story. Sticks with the reader a long time afterwards.

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas Author

Thanks, Stampdad...I got a lot of visibility on the Hub with this one. One of those moments for me. Glad you enjoyed it! WB

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Truckstop Sally 6 years ago

Darn it! I was thinking he was well on his way to Tuscon! I was hoping the apron man had melted even more of the ice away with his good will. Thanks for another adventure. Any suggestions for an upbeat one to balance out the pain?

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas Author

@Truckstop Sally...You know, I never really said that the guy they found was him...you just kind of assumed the worst as the reader, huh? Have it your way...To lighten up you can do "Firepower" and "White Shoe Syndrome". WB

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Becky Katz 4 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Great story.

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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Becky Katz...Thank you, Becky. This is one of my favorites as well. You might also enjoy, "Gin House Blues". WB

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Becky Katz 4 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Reading from the beginning forward. I got bored and thought I would find some good ones that I haven't read here. I was right. I am sharing also so you will have more visitors. Some new ones probably.

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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Becky Katz...It is raining comments today, Becky. All I can do to keep you. You have set off a firestorm! LOL! Thanks! WB

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Becky Katz 4 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Good, I love the share button. I just discovered it and it is so nice. I hope someone does it for me.

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