Haiku Poems: Kissing Prince Charming, Gravity and The Olympians

One Day My Prince Will Come

Girl braves mosquitoes

Desperately kissing toads

How very charming


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The Olympians

Extraordinary;

National heroes shines bright

Powered by a dream

Gravity

Intoxicated

Smashed under the apple tree

beer meets gravity

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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Jamie I do love haiku poems, but I've only recently started writing them, still exploring.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

I love your new collection of Haiku's. They are so much fun and a great tool to work on syllabics with. Jamie


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Angela, welcome and many thanks for the visit and comment, much appreciated.


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Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

Truely fantastic!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Angel, always good to see you, thank you for the comment and terrific vote. Hope you're having a brilliant day.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

I love the whole thing in here..few words but so so loaded ! I voted this all except funny..


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Rahul, Praise indeed, coming from you, it means a lot. Many thanks and God bless.


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

brilliant context in these haikus! I loved them!

What a talent to speak so much in so little words


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Unknown, thank you for the visit and comment, much appreciated, I'll be coming round later to check out your new work.

Vidya, welcome; its very nice to see you, so glad you enjoyed it.

Ruchira, Always nice to see you, I'm very thrilled to know you enjoy the haikus, thanks for the vote.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Very beautiful haikus! Vote + and all!


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Vidya Mallar 4 years ago from India

Nice haiku... I thought of some fairy tale I have read long before, when I read the first one.. Interesting...Have a nice time..


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

awesome!

loved each one of them

voted up and sharingit across


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Max, Vinaya, Thank you both for the insightful comments, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the poems. My best to you both


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Your haiku are like old wine in a new bottle. I think frog prince is the best piece.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Awe, this is just so lovely =) Jo, I was feeling like I was turning pages, so much said, chapter after chapter, it felt like a book!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Lesley, many thanks for the visit and comment. All the best.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Terrific haiku's - loved them and voted up!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Wetnose, you've made my day. Many thanks.


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Your talent is tremendous.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

thanks tobusiness.. I had a Forest Gump moment :) bless you


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Voronwe, I'm always experimenting. Many thanks for the kind words.

LetitiaFT, so glad you liked it. Thank you for the comment and for stopping by.

Shiningirisheyes, always lovely to see you. Much appreciated.


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Voronwe 4 years ago

Cool, Jo! Your angle is surprising as always. Liked the last one and the pictures. Yeah, some frogs only remain frogs as a friend complained once.


shiningirisheyes 4 years ago

Simply beautiful. Such vivid and glorious words to go with the photos.


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LetitiaFT 4 years ago from Paris via California

Delightful!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Frank, more-likely to be my fault, should have wrote a small intro. Anyway, mosquitoes usually represents summer, girl is at a mosquitoes infested pond kissing toads and wishing for her prince charminag, us girls would face anything for the right one. And who else would be giving a mouse a piggy-back.

Thank you for the visit and vote of confidence.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Debbie, so nice to see you, thanks for the visit and the awesome. much appreciated.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

yeah okay voted up :) that's me hiding behind ignorance because I couldn't understand the first haiku.. it made me feel stupid.. so again Yeah okay voted up


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Awesome Haiku..love your poems..debbie

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