Haiku Poem that sums up my evening

Step away it’s mine

No one need get hurt today

Last slice of peach pie…

Hmmm....

Wow, Haiku poems are very short! It seems like all the time I sweated over this hub in no way offsets the calories I consumed by eating the slice of pie. So I ask myself, "Was it worth it?" Was it worth eating the pie and was it worth writing the Haiku. The answer comes back with a resounding "YES!" on both counts.

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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Delicious haiku :)


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks Susan... indeed it was.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

the pie looks delicious to me.. and the Haiku does too. I love how you did it.

voted up

Debbie


Faith Reaper 4 years ago

Yummy! Clever, clever, clever - enjoyed every bite (I mean bit) of it! Voted up. Don't you just hate it when you're brought a piece of pie at a restaurant and it is really more of a sliver than a piece, and the person with whom you are with says, "I don't want any," and then that person eats most of your piece of pie!!! I mean, come on . . . Faith Reaper


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

@ Deborah Brooks - delicious and nutritious and all mine!

@ Faith Reaper - the scenario you outlined is tantamount to a declaration of war. Glad you enjoyed your "bite" or Haiku


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Love it! this haiku made me hungry. so very worth it.


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tnderhrt23 4 years ago

Now this left me drooling! Nice job!


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

@lovedoctor926 - this hungry made me haiku.

@tnderhrt23 - remember to wipe your keyboard :-)


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

YES! now..pass the pie!


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

@ImKarn23 - thank you for the exhuberent comment, but whilst I cling to my last waking breath my last piece of pie will remain firmly in my grasp...


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Angelme566 4 years ago

That's my favorite haiku and a pie..share some pie and win a friend...lol!


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

@Angelme566 - I'll split it with you...


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

hahaha cute and cute!


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brakel2 4 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

I like your photo and haiku poem. One thing I do like about poem hubs is to know how the poet got the inspiration to write. I don't know how that would work in a haiku poem. Anyway, love it and wish I had done more with poetry. You have talent.


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petenali 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

@brakel2 - The inspiration was my wife's excellent peach pie which I had no intention of sharing, nor will I ever...with anybody...never! Lol!

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