All the wonderful poets on hubpages have been giving me tips on how to get this haiku down right. Their advice is to keep trying. You don't have to tell me twice! So, here I go at practice, practice, practice. I know Japanese Haiku writes about seasons but I sometimes find it difficult to draw real emotion about a season. Seasons and weather are so much a part of our lives we don't often think how they can be linked to our emotions.
Spring bringing early warmth
Lighting young and old hearts and minds
With renewed hope
Lonely cold winter nights
Icicles forming in your brain
Looking for love's warmth
Summer sun shines
Glistening on dancing water
Waiting for clouds
My ponderings on seasons/weather.
We have so many emotions every day, changing all the time.
Emotions always swirling
Rising and falling
In the lonely heart
on clean cheeks
with thought inside
This ends my current practice session. I hope these few little haiku's gave ou food for thought. I think it's time to move on to something else, read more about haiku and try again another time.
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