Universe (Haiku)

Haiku: Universe


Burning yellow orb

Candle in the dark, life alone

On a mote of dust

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ignugent17 4 years ago

Very intense haiku. Fascinating picture too. Thanks for sharing!


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ThatFatGuy 4 years ago from Here and there Author

Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind words.


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ChristyWrites 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

I like the part 'candle in the dark', good image. I vote beautiful and will share too.


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ThatFatGuy 4 years ago from Here and there Author

Thank you very much Christy!!


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Haiku poems are a favorite of mine to write. This was incredible and well written. Voted up, awesome, and interesting :)


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ThatFatGuy 4 years ago from Here and there Author

Thanks Cashmere! Your Haiku "Vibrant View" is the best one i've read so far on HP!

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