Halloween Poem

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eeeeek

dig the knife a little deeper

the pain isn't great enough

I want to be a real creeper

one that takes your heart

breaking into a million pieces

never mind who I am

or what I am

I really do not matter !

it is what you are ,what you feel

and what you can steal

what feelings I have

what feelings I give

there is no reason for me to live so

dig the knife a bit deeper, deeper

my blood will run, all over the floor

wishing, wishing I had more

to make you feel if you can

who and what I really am

so turn that knife, twist and pull

if it makes you feel whole

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justom 5 years ago from 41042

Oh the life (and death) of a pumpkin. Well done G-ma!! Peace!! Tom


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Yes I say well done to. I can feel that knife digging a little deeper and I'm not even an apple:0)


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Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

Makes me wish I had a red apple!


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

justom...yes...life and death...Have a fun Halloween, don't eat too much candy...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

saddlerider1...yes, I feel it too. Deeply and it hurts...Thanks for commenting...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

Pollyannaiana...yep...I just made 12 small apple pies and 6 tarts the day before yesterday, from all the apples I have...Yummm...wish I could send you a picture...but I think I have posted them here long ago, I do this every fall...:O) Hugs and thanks for commenting G-Ma


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Raven King 5 years ago from Cabin Fever

Very scary poem...I will leave the light on!

(((HUGS))) G-Ma! :)


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

nothing compared to saddlerider1's story....Hi sweet Lady...Having a nice day I hope...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

I enjoyed this hub. Thank you so much for sharing.

Take care G-Ma Johnson.


ralwus 5 years ago

Deep and mysterious Merle. Is it a pumpkin speaking to you? Us?


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

Well 'ralwus' it seems it can be just about whatever you can imagine...Thanks for stopping by :O) Hugs G-Ma


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

Eiddwen...Thanks for commenting and Take care too...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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cwarden 5 years ago from USA

Great and unusual poem! Thanks for sharing it.


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

cwarden...I have to agree with you, not what I usually write...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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no body 5 years ago from Rochester, New York

Wow, that describes a pirate alright. A soul hurting and collecting booty. By any means necessary. Don't get too close to me unless you are prepared to cut me, to find out who I am. Take what you can and give nothing back. Hugs Ma!


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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free Author

no body...surprise to hear that from you...LOL I reckon it does sound like a pirate...:O) Hugs G-Ma

Must be the gypsy in me LOL


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Love the picture and the short, vivid poem. Sort of dark but also very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

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