Manifesting Dreams

When it hasn't happened yet

That dream

That break

Didn't come in

Waiting patiently

Working hard

Trying to manifest

Everything and beyond

The love has died

Everything else

Lost in the mist


Be patient

Trust yourself

It's all in your hands

Just hoping


For things to come


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

beautiful my sweet!

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Well written! I spent 30 years fashioning dreams. Really.

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I can feel the hope and anticipation in this piece..Loved it!

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SubRon7 3 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Beautiful work, Caroline, and that last word really nailed it!

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maramerce 3 years ago from United States

I have had my dreams stolen by so many people that it's almost ridiculous at this poont in my life. Being cheated out of your dreams is worse than being cheated in any other way.

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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

what a collection of words hoping to manifest dreams or a dream very well written Caroline :)

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Truly beautiful!!


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mathira 3 years ago from chennai

Caroline, incredible choice of words. It was really good to read it.

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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Love is like a seed.... and it can rain and it can freeze... it's amazing how many things try to stop a thing becoming or manifesting... or growing. But when the thin almost invisible green young thread pokes above the nurturing earth, we see that the spark has been successful. The arrival of that amazing miracle is proof that love, happiness, warmth or life can be still worth trying for. Love is worth giving a chance if it might be real.

I feel that optimism arriving at the end of this hub, and it is so wonderful how you wrote it. You are a great poet, Caroline. :)

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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Michael thank you. :)

Mhatter thank you. You should never stop haha. :)

Ruby thank you dear friend. :)

Jim thank you so much dear friend. :)

Mara I agree with you. That's why it's so important to keep positive and keep trying. Take care. :)

Frank thank you dear friend. :)

Eddy thank you. :)

Mathira I'm glad and thank you. :)

Astra thank you so much dear friend. :)

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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Love and loss are always a package. But love can win if we nurture it and strive for it.

Simply beautiful and meaningful. Voted up :)

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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Blaise. :)

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