Haunt Their Dreams

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Selfish,

he wanted someone else

dreaming of his painful death,

cruel,

extremely bitter,

mental ridicule,

mental abuse,

huge tears,

dark fears,

fits and outbursts,

questions hitting the fan,

why, why, why,

did he want to die, die, die?

He was hanging

from a beam

so the sight would

haunt their dreams.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

A rhythm to die for , with that oh so sweet poetic flare.

I feel you more in these, where I also feel the story in your head .

Well written my brethren.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks sky for reading you are true.. had to put two poems because hubpages said one poem was too short.. didn't understand that at the time :(


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Don't know what you are waiting on , it's the best way.

Thanks brethren.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks Sky :)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Sad and dark, but beautifully done, you leave me wanting more. Voting up.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks for visiting this page Tobusiness bless you :) Frank


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pstraubie48 21 months ago from sunny Florida

The clarity of your works puts me in the room, in the moment with those whom you portray. Such power in your words.

Angels are on the way to you once again this evening Frank. ps


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Frank Atanacio 21 months ago from Shelton Author

thank you so much PS...:)

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