Dating Lesson 32.34 – Have Eyes Checked (limerick)

Young suitor who thought he’s the best

For her he had passed every test

Till one night her twin

Did temp him to sin

Pray would he cave in or be blessed


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Funny and Well Done!!!!!!


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Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

Cool one mhatter; if the twins in the pic are anything to go by it could well be a toss up between the cave-in and the blessing.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Awesome limerick, one of my favorites of yours for sure!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Interesting! Voted up.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Well, it's short but it is entertaining.... and twins are a very real appeal and a temptation to many... :P

I love your sense of humour. :)


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

hahaha i loved it Mhattr!


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

Another funny start to my day I love it :)


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JakeFrost 4 years ago from London, United Kingdom

Haha, well done... Great limerick!


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

hehe lovely one.

short and sweet


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Ha Ha Ha Very good. Can't say he had any bad luck though!


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Mhatter99

Something tells me he didn't pass the final test. LOL

Voted up and funny

Take care :)


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Very funny! I bet he didn't pass though!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Very fun read enjoyed this limerick !


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The perils of a twin!


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

I doubt he passed, but he is being set up. Very cute!


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Come on man - make mama proud - control yourself!!! lol

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