He Comes in Dreams

Dream by Erathic/Flicker
Dream by Erathic/Flicker

In the corner of my room

In shadows, you await the moon


Poetry swirls in my mind, as the veil descends

One world fades and dies, as one is born


Silently beneath the sea of sheets, you slip

Weightless over my toes, ankles, calves


You trace a line of intent

Shallows and depths to be explored


Excited recognition in me stirs

Anticipation of your touch


Hands schooled by eons yet still curious

Delving, searching, finding


Fingertips awaken skin

Effervescent with the promise


Alert and conscious every nerve

Waiting, wanting, writhing


Warm and liquid beckons

Weight and heat answers


My aching hunger feasts

Gripping, arching, moaning


Rolling silver swells in rhythm

Break against the shore


Waves crash, flesh quivers

Pulsing, panting, spent


Left heavy and still, washed upon the sand

Back into the night you fade, my phantom paramour

I was inspired by Frieda Babbley's poem Soft and Delicious and then Cris A's Foreplay

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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

RB

I see you've gone an extra notch from where my poem stopped. And you took it all the way home! If I may quote Frieda's poem, this is quite "soft and delicious". Lovely :D

Btw, love the art above, it sets the mood :D


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm glad you liked it Cris. I don't know your "little earthquakes" sounded like a happing ending. Or was that just the beginning?


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

Okay, if you should ask LOL the serpent lies motionless, before it makes its kill. hence the little eartquakes are heartbeats that should be quelled lest the surprise is denied the prey. suffice to say, the surprise is the bigger earthquakes :D


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oooooh, I am educated and now curious. I will wait for your second installment then Cris.


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Elena. 7 years ago from Madrid

I'm a bit out of breath after reading this, Randy. But in a good way, you know what I mean? :-)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Yes I do! Once you've got your breathing down, you can go for multiple reads.


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

How about me, Randy?  Are you waiting for an installment from me?  I give good installment!  (Ok, ok, sorry.  Couldn't resist!)

Very nice and titillating poem with great imagery and provocative language.  If I had to pick a favorite line, it would be "warm and liquid beckons."  Delicious!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Christoph I'll take an installment from you. It doesn't have to poetry, as long as its juicy!


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Pam Roberson 7 years ago from Virginia

Randy, this is wonderfully sensual and steamy! Anticipation of a touch is probably the most intense feeling. My favorite line is "Hands schooled by eons yet still curious. The entire poem is lovely. :)

So did you write this for your Dr. Soft Hands? *wink* I'm still waiting for his number. ;)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Anticipation is the absolute best. :) I'm glad you liked it! And no, its not for my Dr. If I had this kind of crush on him, I'd have a really hard time putting my feet in the stirrups. Or would that be, way to easy of a time?


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Tom Rubenoff 7 years ago from United States

Nicely done, nice imagery and sensory stuff. Very much enjoyed


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Tom. I reworked it after reading some of yours, to get a better rhythm going. I write poetry by instinct but I should probably study up on it. Glad you enjoyed it.


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Tom Rubenoff 7 years ago from United States

Your instinct seems to be working absolutely fabulously, but poetry is fun to read, so why the hell not?


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sharrie69 7 years ago from Trinidad (an island in the Caribbean)

With dreams like those who would ever want to get out of bed???


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marcofratelli 7 years ago from Australia

Randy, love it!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks for the word "fabulously" Tom.

@sharrie69 - Seriously, huh?  And if I could teach my Paramour to bring me coffee in bed I wouldn't need a man! Thanks for coming by Sharrie.

Thank you Marco. :)


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sharrie69 7 years ago from Trinidad (an island in the Caribbean)

and get him to wash the dishes too while you're at it ;-)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Now you're talking about my real "dream" man! LOL.


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R. Blue 7 years ago from Right here

I don't even smoke.....but I think I need a cigarette!!!


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cindyvine 7 years ago from Kyiv, Ukraine

wow, omigod, jeez


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goldentoad 7 years ago from Free and running....

I see this place is just full of lust!!!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

R.Blue thanks for stopping in. The smokers are all out on the patio.

Cindy, yep thats the reaction I was going for.

Golden Boy, lust is as thick in here as Aunt Jemima's syrup.


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Lgali 7 years ago

Randy, love it! very nice hub


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Lgali.


badcompany99 7 years ago

Oh cheers Randy, get me bloody randy, you are a minxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


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blondepoet 7 years ago from australia

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, where is the fan, things are getting hot around here..........


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

A minx am I? Perhaps so, but doesn't that make you a Bad Boy in my company.

Did I get you over heated BP, oh good.


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R. Blue 7 years ago from Right here

How about a 4some??? we'll have BC's galley wench prepare the ship...mudring...some plastic sheets and a gallon or two of KY..his and hers. BP will bring her bunny sabre.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ah Blue, are you feeling left out?


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R. Blue 7 years ago from Right here

No...just left too early yesterday....really like this guy BC...he seems to fit right in with our naughty clan. I've made him my wingman.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ya, he seems like good people. :)


Adam B 7 years ago

Sometimes I cum in my dreams as well.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I thought for a millisecond of spelling that way. LOL. Would have given away the happy ending though. :)


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Kelsey Tallis 7 years ago from USA-Ohio

This is beautiful! Especially:

"Silently beneath the sea of sheets, you slip

Weightless over my toes, ankles, calves

You trace a line of intent

Shallows and depths to be explored"

And the photo is perfect!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi Kelsey!  I like to see different peoples favorite lines it tells a little about them I think.  Ya I lucked out with that photo huh?,


ColdWarBaby 7 years ago

"Hands schooled by eons yet still curious"

You might have titled this "Incubus". A somewhat darker take.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Or Vampire Lover?


ColdWarBaby 7 years ago

That could work.


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trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

ok, back to see what the wife is up to again bbl....Great work Randy


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

When your done with "the wife" come back and tell me what you think. Until then I'll be satisfied with great... ya great works for me.


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Laughing Mom 7 years ago

Anticipation is the best part. Okay, well maybe not the BEST part, but it's up there.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

LM, I wrote that very thing on another hub today. Its a close 2nd, 3rd, and 4th for me. :)


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Laughing Mom 7 years ago

Great minds think alike, then.

I've never really sat down to rate it all, but first is a given. :-)


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CurtisCandy 7 years ago from Upstate NY

Umbuwabba!

I was hoping to wite something much wittier and elegant than that, but all the blood has left my brain!

Just WOW! - Intense heat!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I love to have that effect. :) Glad you liked it.


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J.Stump 7 years ago from USA

Thats def. a friday night poem

those are difficult to do but its right there in black and white a true blue friday nighter


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

What makes them difficult to do J? Can't keep your hands on the keyboard?


Hangin 10 7 years ago

I loved the part:

"Rolling silver swells in rhythm

Break against the shore

Waves crash,flesh quivers

Pulsing,panting,spent"

It reminds me of 2 huge waves of water of equal size crashing against echother and ending up to nothing so that it blends in with the rest of the sea,or how you can take a positive number and a negative number of the same number and make it 0.The ending result: priceless,effortless,so easily done like a second nature.Im not a big fan of numbers but what you said in your poem is like a mathematic equasion.Solving the probelm is really not that hard like some people think,all you ever needed to know was the formula in order to solve the probelm.

Translation=

once you master the formula of love,you can solve just about anything thats in that category.

Very nicely done randy:)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hangin 10, thanks for leaving such a thoughtful comment. Its fun for me to "see" the pictures my words create in other peoples minds. Great fun.


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J.Stump 7 years ago from USA

Nah although lately i could see it being true

but friday night is this pub on the outskirts of london and if you read there and you don't bring quality the self proclaimed experts will heckle you till you hate your work yourself and england haha, but youd do just fine with this one in front of the firing squad


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh goodness. I could never read my stuff out loud in front of human beings! I'm too shy for that, and would be devastated if anyone disapproved.


RinaMonte 7 years ago

Randy B,

Love this poem, and the way you play with the movement and paradox, and the opposites...and the sea metaphor...and the painting.

Will go read your other hubs, just got here:)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Rina, Thanks for coming by and thank you for the thoughtful comment. I do love a good metaphor; bit of a metaphor whore actually.


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shamelabboush 7 years ago

I was reading and gasping rapidly. My mouth felt dry and my hands were so sweat!!!!! Will call my girfriend now :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Shamel, Glad to get the party started :)


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rdfrank67 7 years ago from Seattle

I think this is my absolute favorite :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ya, its one of my favorites too. My first naughty one.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

loved the picture and the colours, and the poem of course


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ya Brenda I was lucky to find that cool picture.


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Lisa Hess 6 years ago from gsh393@yahoo.com

Oh how I do love a good orgasm metaphore. More anytime please - Thank you


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Lol, I'll see what I can do Lisa. :)


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Seldon55 6 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

So, I read it, I took a cold shower and I'm back. Someone with eon of experience would only be curious about something (someone) really special! the biggest sexual organ may be the skin,but, the most powerful is the mind. You stoked the fire of a lot of minds with this one...Eddie


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I do love to stoke fires. I really, really do. :)


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Arthur Windermere 6 years ago

Hey Randy,

Wow, first poem anyone's ever written about me. haha

But seriously, I like your choice of participles. Anyone ever tell you that? "Hey baby, nice participles." Good ol' dirty verbs. You're my kinda poet.

Later alligator


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Greetings Arthur, thanks for coming in for a read. No, you are the first to compliment me on my participles. And now I wonder why no one has commented on them before. I obviously have better than average participles and I know how to use them! Thanks for noticing ;)


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davidseeger 6 years ago from Bethany, OK

I'm in awe. Such expressive mind pictures. The compliments that I want to share are to lackluster to be worth sharing. Only one thing. To call it naughty does it an injustice. It is too beautiful to be so referred. It gives me some inkling of what it is like for a sensitive woman. It should help a man be a more sensitive man.


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh don't be put off David, please. Naughty is so much more fun than squeaky clean. Explain what you mean by an "inkling of what it is like for a sensitive woman." Not that I'm doubting you. Just didn't know I was one.


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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

Well, that's one that gets the heart rate up a bit! I'll just head down and get my nails done now! WB


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

A cowboy with a manicure, interesting image. Ranching doesn't make for soft hands and now that I've had the soft hands of white collar on me, I must say I prefer them.


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Michael Ray King 6 years ago from Palm Coast

Eloquent and powerful. A nice counterweight to the other piece you listed on your profile page. I was not sure what to expect and I was not disappointed! I love well written poetry where ideas, actions, love, pain, sadness, etc. all are painted with words not necessarily related to the topic. Going back over them, I only note moaning and paramour as directly related to your focus. That is magnificent writing. You reveal beauty and passion where too many today cheapen it with tawdry words and images. Thank you for sharing another extremely well written piece.


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well thanks Michael. I don't think this is my strongest poem on hp but it is the first on this subject matter I ever wrote. There have been many, many since then :)


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Tom_Radford 6 years ago from London

Steamy! :)


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

Great write I was rolling on the crests of your waves.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oops Tom, don't know how I missed you! Thanks.

Hi Sligobay. I hope you enjoyed the ride.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Haha NICE

You commented mine so I visited your page to find THIS lovely piece.

Sultry, Sexy, Seductive, Sensual.

Appetizing and alluring. ;]

Brilliant work.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh I'm glad you approve. I'm especially glad you used the word appetizing.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

* Nom Nom, Chomp Chomp *


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

I'm thinking passionate weightless effervescent writhing love is the best kind.

I am totally in love..:} (and considering a new avocation as a phantom paramour).

Very nice read of a well crafted experience...


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi bbnix nice to meet you! Phantom paramour work is a good gig if you can get it ;)


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Thanks Randy. Nice to meet you as well. I'm quite good at spontaneously choosing new professions that are extremely challenging and most often traumatic, but the rewards are to die for...and I always follow my heart!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Go read my Play With Me, you might want to consider the saxophone as well :D


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

I will and I love the sax...


ralwus 5 years ago

in the corner of the room, under the leering moon; i am all creamy in the middles. :) CC


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Are you a twinkie Charlie?


ralwus 5 years ago

Hahaha in moments like this, yes. a real treat deep fried. with red raspberry sauce. today i am raw meat and why are you up so early? nevermind. x


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Two weeks since I first met you and a revisit most adored. You've taken me quite by surprise, still, your Phantom Paramour. Truly a gift of a writer you are our dear Randy, and just so you know, you still play that sax like no other to stir this man's core...;)

You make us all feel like twinkies I think =}


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

CC I just hadn't gone to bed yet. ;)

Hi BB, all men are treats.


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Stan Fletcher 5 years ago from Nashville, TN

I'm hitting the shower. A cold one. Very cool imagery. Rated up.....


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Heeheee. Glad you liked it.


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Captain Spaceman 5 years ago from Manhattan Beach

That was impressive, I usually gauge poetry by how quickly it makes me see a picture in my mind of whatever it's trying to describe, this piece brought enough vivid imagery for a whole Audrey Hepburn marathon into my head...It had a great flow to it as well.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh goody I gave you mind pictures; thats better than goose bumps. Although I endeavor to give those as well.


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flying_fish 5 years ago from GTA

I didn't see pictures, I had my eyes closed... The arching back brought me over the edge, too. But of course, it wasn't me - I wouldn't have DREAMED of fading away...


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

LOL, flying fish. Yea, I don't think phantom lovers are allowed to watch the sun come up... says so in their rule book.


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RoseAsauresRex 5 years ago from the sunny state of California

amzing I just love it! love the rythem of it very good! youre very good


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well thank you RoseAsauresRex! I so glad you liked it.


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RoseAsauresRex 5 years ago from the sunny state of California

Your welcome! i enjoy reading your poems they're very beautiful


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I just posted another 60 seconds ago, but its not in the same family as this one :)


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What Is Q 5 years ago from Tennessee

Darn it, Randy. I was half asleep and you woke me up. Sigh. Thanks, I guess. Great poem. Voted up and pleasant dreams.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I specialize in sweet dreams and good mornings Q.


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What Is Q 5 years ago from Tennessee

Well I could use some service. I'm sitting in an empty house and drinking a martini gone wild, all by myself.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hmmmm all of a sudden I'm thirsty.


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

So glad you recommended this hub in your bio. What a sensual adventure!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Nice to meet you Sally! Glad you enjoyed it.


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Wow , this is so well written , you nailed it! I love the style of your written expressions. I think you know men!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I wouldn't presume to know men at all! I just write what I feel and I'm glad you approve.


Claudia Schönfeld 5 years ago

passion at its bes...nice

and you should give the octain a try...smiles


Claudia Schönfeld 5 years ago

i meant "best" of course..


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I did Claudia you saw what happened :P


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JohnnyZenigame 5 years ago from ...in the dark corners of the night; where truth sleeps.

Mysterious lover...I can dig it.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Mmmmmm, me too.


cindy 5 years ago

I love this..you write what the rest of us do not have the nerve to write but would love too:)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Glad you liked it Cindy. Its easy to do when you're hiding behind an alter ego :)


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Wow, so intense and so carnal! There were so many great lines in this piece but my favorite has to be:

"You trace a line of intent

Shallows and depths to be explored"

What a great phrase. This was awesome and I voted it that way. Wonderful job.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you Poetic Fool. What a lovely comment.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Sensational and sweet. Provoking and intense poem. Good work pal


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you sir, I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Ciarriadh 4 years ago

Inspirational; sophisticated edginess; distant memories re-visited. Thank you.


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Randy Behavior 4 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi Ciarriadh! Thanks for the comment :)

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