He Was On Fire,With A Burning Desire Poem

He Was On Fire,With A Burning Desire

He Was On Fire,With A Burning Desire

He was on Fire, with a burning desire.

To have her once more, just like before.

Wow. He said. Fire walked into the bedroom.

He was about to pop like a balloon.

Love at first sight, it was dynamite.

A flame burned with in him plum to his loins.

As she leaned down to touch him unknowingly.

They made love by the open fire.

He was on fire with desire.

A hot passion burned between them.

Was it real or just a dream?

It was real or though it seemed.

He had met the girl of his dreams.

The girl of his Dreams has become his reality.

Reality how terrific it all seems to find the girl

He had always dreamed of.

He had always hoped for.

Dreams do come true.

For this he is a witness.

He was on Fire, with a burning desire

By Rhonda G. Waits 1/31/11

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Rhonda G. Waits

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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

When a woman primps and pays attention to her self,men notice I promise.;)


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Mentalist acer for your top notch comment. A ote to all women out there. Change is good. Thanks for dropping by. Your comment is most appreciated.


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stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

A wonderful poem of love and passion, that of which God created for romantic love. God Bless You, and your sweet and precious family.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks stars for your beautiful comment. I always love t when you stop by my hubs. You always have have encouraging words or wisdom you leave behind.

God Bless you and your family.

Sweet wishes Rhonda


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Rosie2010 5 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Hiya my dear friend Rhonda, what a romantic poem.. so passionate, full of love and lust(?), so sensual. I'm so happy for you and Eric. Eric is a lucky guy.. tell him I said so. lol hugsss

Have a nice day gf,

Rosie


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

All I can say is WOW Rhonda. What passion. How wonderful for the two of you.


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi Rhonda, WOW the sparks were flying that night. hot poem loved it!

Awesome !!!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Rosie nice to see you again. Thanks for the lovely comment. Yes.he always says he is a lucky guy. Thanks

for saying so. I will tell him you said that. You are such a sweet person Rosie. Always thanks for stopping by. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi KoffeeKlatch Gals thanks for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes Eric and I are very happy. I express my feelings through my writing. I appreciate you always for stopping by. Loved your comment. Thank you.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hello kashmir thanks for your great comment. Yes the sparks were flying. I am glad you loved my poem. Thank you for saying so. Your comment is always appreciated.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Hi Rhonda,

A great poem, I loved it.I'm sure it spoke loads about you as a person and all good.

Thanks for sharing

Take care

Eiddwen


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Eiddwen thanks for your comment and compliment. I always write from my heart when I write my poems. Thanks for reading it and leaving a lovely comment. Your comment is always appreciated.

Have a nice day.


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, sizzle sizzle! lol you lucky thing you! great poem, cheers nell


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi thanks for your comment. Yes I guess I am a lucky girl. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for leaving a comment. It is always appreciated.

Have a great day.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I see why! Great write!


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

Wow! Hot stuff...I love it!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Micky Dee for your beautiful comment and compliment.

I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Your comment is always appreciated. Thanks for dropping by.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks PenMePretty for your wonderful comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes I guess it is hot stuff,I always write from my heart. Thanks your comments are most appreciated.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

Hey ... feeling hot, hot, hot! love the scorching song and the sizzling emotion that erupts within. Thanks for sharing this intimate moment.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Docmo for your hot comment and compliment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for dropping by and leaving a great comment. Your comments are most appreciated.


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PhoenixV 5 years ago from USA

Is it me or is it getting warm in here? :) :) Great Poetry!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks phoenixV for your comment and compliment. Yes I do write some steamy poems and they are all true. Written by me and about my life. I am glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you stopping by my hubs.

Have a great day.


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Two thumbs up for burning desires...


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Denise I appreciate your comments. You just inspire me I love to get feed back about my work. It just makes my day or night. Thanks for dropping by again. You are such a sweet person.


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toknowinfo 5 years ago

Great great poem. It is nice that you have such passion in your relationship and in your writing. You are very inspirational in many ways. Rated up beautiful and awesome and shared!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks toknowinfo for your delightful comment. Such a lovely compliment. I am honored by your words. I always write my poems from my heart, thanks for noticing it. You are most appreciated my friend.

Have a lovely day


toknowinfo 5 years ago

Well you really are a good writer! One of the most wonderful things about hubpages is that we can use our creative talents to share with others. This helps ourselves and the people we share it with. Keep writing! By the way, my name is Rhonda also, so it is a double pleasure to be friends with you.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hello Rhonda nice to meet you. Love your name as well. Thanks for the warm compliment and you are welcome.I will keep writing, it is my gift to you and the world. You are such a blessing.

Have a great day my new friend


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Little Kim 5 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

Great poem! Very vivid. look forward to reading more.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Little Kim for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks fro dropping by today.

Sweet wishes Rhonda

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