He Begged For More (limerick)

Each kiss and the man’s mind would gleam

His lips never met such a dream

Each placement he’d plan

Till next taste began

Let’s face it the man loved ice cream


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You can keep your ice cream; I'll take that little lady! Great fun! Have a great weekend my friend!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland

This was clever. :)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

That was sweet!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Am I just getting older, or do the young ladies just start looking younger? I don't know if this one's legal, her smile is rightly quite regal, cute little smile, need wait a while, must walk away with my beagle. Great Job, mh!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

Yes.The model is legal age.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

mmmmm love ice cream... I love your limerick.. so clever..

debbie


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

lol, MH, another fun limerick! Enjoyed it...... :)


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

You have a way with these !


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Yeah! I like "Ice Cream" too. LOL


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

Lolz..! Would you rather have the ice cream or the lady? ;-)

Voted up and funny


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anglnwu 4 years ago

Haha, what a way to tease the reader--nicely done.


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snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

Silly and fun Mhatter, well done. :)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Ha Ha - I'm quite sure "ice cream" will become the new tag line for many gentlemen on this site!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That's excellent. Once a week I have to have Ben and Jerry's Cherry Garcia, so I understand your predicament completely.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Ice cream with hot chocolate covered with nuts..Heaven..Loved it..


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I loved the minty twang in the end.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Nicely done and made me want an ice cream.


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Ruchira 9 months ago from United States

Limericks via you are awesome!!

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