He Looks The Same To Me (limerick)

It wasn’t his cash or his car

That set dreams of women ajar

Nor muscles of blade

Whose eyes were like jade

He’s taken that made him a star

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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

LOVE THIS! it can be so true! what a clever little poem!


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

What is a woman's fascination with a married man?


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Motherbynature 4 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

Lovely.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

We can all change our appearances now...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Terrific


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Wonderful


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

You speka such words of truth about some. Something unattainable always makes you want it more.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

He's just another challenge to brag about. True story here, sad, but true.


LikaMarie 4 years ago

That's so true, that it seems no one notices when you're single, yet when you're attached... You can't shake the broom enough.


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p10kabhijita 4 years ago from India

Great lesson on desirability vs ease of achieving it :)


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molometer 4 years ago

I like the line.

'Whose eyes were like jade'

The green eyed monster sounds so much hasher lol.

Voted up and sharing.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Good one, m. Voted up.

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