He Turned To Me (poem)

He turned to me a teardrop in his eye

What has he done to share this fate with me

To bear such pain and wretch├ęd misery

We welcome death to come and set us free


But him it seems salvation does he see

He reaches for our answer in the sky

He holds a fate that nothing can deny

Was it for nothing that he came to die


So strange that I should pay for sins today

And bear a witness to event so true


I held my screams to listen to him pray

Within his blood I sensed a hope anew


I heard him say before I passed away

Forgive them for they know not what they do

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Mh, you know this is my favorite one of all! Thank you for such a beautiful poem to glorify Him and His truths. So very beautiful, it has made me cry. I believe those last words are the most powerful ever spoken.

Thank dear heart for this lovely poem that has touched my heart so. Lovely music video!

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless you. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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lilyfly 3 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

Beautiful poem, the rhyming (for me), is less than what I think you can most certainly do, b ut still, gorgeous poem! Love yaz, lily

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torrilynn 3 years ago


Really nice and beautiful poem

that you have here. Your an amazing

writer. Hope to read more from you soon.

voted up.

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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Very brilliantly done this is ! Thanks for sharing. Shared and voted up.

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dallaswriter 3 years ago from North Carolina

I so love it when another can share in words her love for Christ and what HE did for us. Well written Mhatter99, voted up, useful and awesome!

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Wonderful, Martin! Amazingly beautiful.

How creative to give a view from one of the others crucified that day.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Those are about the truest words that you could utter. It we have no forgiveness, we have nothing.

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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Martin: Very nice my friend. A great tribute to a man for whom time stopped, and then started again!...Wayne

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Thank you for reeling us back in, Martin. How soon the world has forgotten.

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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...I on the other hand truly feel...THEY did know of what they did..and to this day I still feel the human race knows what they're doing..THEY just don't care...

Life is so precious..We should not have to welcome DEATH to set us free...

Your write was very thought provoking...thank you for the share...peace to you...

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is beautiful Martin..Thank you for sharing..Loved it...

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LisaMarie724 3 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

Absolutely amazing and beautiful and so many other adjectives that I can't even get out right now. Bless you.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

You have a way with great expressions thanks

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Beth37 3 years ago

What a powerful story you have conveyed here. Thank you. :)

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Maggie Bennett 3 years ago from New York

Powerful words. Very moving.

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