Heart Thrown Forward

Whats the Soundtrack to Your Life

Got A Thought?

 Wow

I wake up and I cant breathe

Why

The air is clear or so my blind eyes can percieve it as much

My hands meander about till they find metal

I slip them on with deft hands that dont match my muddled state

My eyes flutter to the window

Did the storm come agian

Yes

The breathing water gulps at the tremulous drops

The sky aknowladges its watcher with a silent smile

Its color balking shades of grey  like a pillow case on a terror stricken night

Summer begins to cough as colors all over draw their darker hues about them like a blanket pulled tight on a first winters light

The wind has gone swimming again for I can smell the dampness and taste its chill

It signals another step in times road

What to do

What to say

What to think

How many of us share in a single blink

The world churns as Fall agian takes its first new drink

Will this change make any effect on the strength of your very breath

Perhaps with the knowing that it has changed its sight will bring a hope that it will cast your eyes in a new an truer light

 

 

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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A beautiful caution of the changing seasons claim on emotion PoeticColor;)


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epigramman 6 years ago

it's hard to follow Mentalist acer - lol lol - but here goes - obviously the highest compliment that I can give any writer is that you are developing your very own language - and it's unique, bold, clever and daring - a true creative anomaly you are!!!


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poeticColor22 6 years ago from The Coast Author

Thanks to both of you. Your words are rubys falling with the rain, your so encouraging and gracious.

Its always a plesure to have yalls aknowladgement.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

Very special and very much appreciated.You have such a beautiful way with words.

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