Heavens Door

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In a World with only Candle Light


In this world filled up with Lies

We place Shades upon them

The Candle Lights


And too we seek to

To screen them in

Within the darkness of

The Knight


But, before the Quest the final test

Is over, but before the Battle is won

There comes another one


His Majesty Sings and sends to Us

The one with the cloven hoof

And the divided Tongue


Sex, Sex, Sex, we will

Never be the same

Whilst the dewdrops fall

his continued rein


His call goes out

And ALL have came

Least they burn alive

Becoming burnt for His pain


In a world with only candles lit

We wish to put on shades

As we lie everywhere

We go


Upon them the Candle Lights

Were shade we put upon

The world she lies

No More


Sheepish little children now

We are; Knocking knock

Knock, knocking on

Heaven's Door!


A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man



Knocking On Heaven's Door

Comments 6 comments

ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

We need the candlelights of the world, don't we? It is a messed up world. Very cool poem! Voted up and awesome!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Knocking on heavens door. Love the song, and your poem is neat.


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Sinbadsailorman 5 years ago from Valparaiso, Indiana Author

ExoticHippieQueen, Thank you for the read and the comment and yes we do need their light where are they where have they gone where are they hiding and why? People always wonder why the things are the way they are and yet don't even realize where they are or why they are here. Let alone who is running this our show. Thank you for voting the poem up and all.

Donnie/ Sinbad the Sailor Man


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Sinbadsailorman 5 years ago from Valparaiso, Indiana Author

always exploring You picked up on that quickly enough. I had just got done listening to The song Knocking on Heavens door when then I wrote this poem. Thanks for the read and the comment.

Donnie/ Sinbad the Sailor Man


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quildon 4 years ago from Florida

Very thought-provoking! Nice poem.


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Sinbadsailorman 4 years ago from Valparaiso, Indiana Author

Thank you for the read and comment quildon, I try. I am still trying from time to time, but I am happy if people when they do read them like them just a little bit. Thanks again.

Donnie/ Sinbad the Sailor Man

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