Hell is Overcrowded

Hell is overcrowded

Hell is overcrowded,

The traffic is increasing rapidly

where sinners," high five the Devils of the Universe"

for sealing the deal.

New York have announced to the world

that it is a done deal,

come out; come out wherever you are,

the closets, around the states are slowly opening.

Poverty, hunger, and crimes in the city remains the same,

our quality of life has move to a slower lane,

where politicians , give clearance, promises,

and standing ovation, to a low rated performances,

however, to some not so amusing! more like abusing.

Centaurs were half-man, half horse,

a mytholgical creatures place into society

Are we living in a world,

where mythicological creatures rules?
Are you feeling the satanic blues?

Have sense and sensibility become so impaired

does anybody really cares?

that tradition have been replaced by fear,

Moreover, substitutes for flawless attitudes,

can the color pink remain the same.

would it eventually be wash away with shame?

Sugar and spice and everything nice

that is what our little girls were made of

is this the changing times?

When our citizens do not know the different from right or wrong.

as the malleable creatures emerges from the closet,

as the the hall of justice, closes its eyes,

letting go of the range, and releases deranged souls into society

asserting they rights as citizens.

Taboo or politically incorrect. ...Tell us why

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Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

The worlds evil is of men, it is not of anything other then men trying to rise to the top of this capitolist constructed cesspool of human suffering.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

well said Matthew Weese..thank you for reading and commenting... and yes cesspool indeed of huamna suffering.


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Cogerson 5 years ago from Virginia

Interesting title that really pulls someone in....nice work....reading between the lines it seems this is a response to recent legislation that passed in a northern state....very well done...voted up and useful.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Cogerson .. Poetry and poet, send out they message in ways The literal part of a poem is important, when a poet have strong feeling about something he writes about it, ..." the art of interpretation... many people might read this piece and walk away with different interpretion of its meaning, good interpreters also watch our for the element of poetry and take them into account, enough said, however Cogerson, u are definitely right, reading between the lines....


Matthew Weese 5 years ago

I'm writing on here as well and would love to gain some followers. Very well written hub my friend.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

no problem Matthew i shall give your hubs some attention

one love Dark!(:)


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sweetie1 5 years ago from India

A very wonderfully written poem darknlovely. Strange i have a friend who says he would love to go to hell as what would he do in heaven but talk with only religious men who would be buttering up god how wonderful he is , while in hell he can do anything he like, smoke, wine, girls, gamble anything and not worry about morals as he is already in hell.


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

It's obvious that frustration is everywhere. It's past due for a time for change, but it's not coming from traditional directions. The hubs here are a perfect example of a place of mutual support, understanding and compassion. It's obvious. Change starts with a dialog, and who better than writers to start the ball rolling.

Then, those of us that are builders, can truly feel the love and support that we need to truly build that majestic future for us all!!!

much love,

bb


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

thank you once again, however, i cannot seem to grasp .. the same sex marriage saga


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Naomi's Banner 5 years ago from United States

We are getting to the place where " men's hearts will fail from fear " spoken about in Revelations. It really is a roller coaster ride and the clean up is looking bigger all the time. Don't loose heart, look to the skys for your Saviour will soon be coming on a white horse to take his bride home. Enjoyed the poem.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Time will tell, thank for commenting, stay true to yourself .. some of us, know the different between right and wrong.(:)


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Guanta 5 years ago from New York City

Thank you Darknlovely3436, this is very insightful. Politicians used to be referred to as men of honor and integrity who listened to the majority of their constituents and society. This is no longer the case!


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Guanta those politician does not worth nothing these day,

just a bunch of money and power they crave for, not for the interest of the people.... I really would suggest that most of them do the honor and "do the ancient Chinese tradition the sword and a blind fold... and honor us....they are usseless ... lost all faith in them....


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

I suggest them techique for most of themhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seppuku


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Earthquarke hit Newyork> tremor, what's next

God help us all.


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Guanta 5 years ago from New York City

Hi Darknlovely3436, I might be the only person in New York who missed the tremor. I never felt anything. Even my sister called me and wanted to know my experience, and I said what tremor. I remember skipping around the city, enjoying the beautiful day, since to me New York is incredible when the humidty is low. Good to hear from you, stay well!


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Guanta 5 years ago from New York City

Hi Darknlovely3436, I don't see any of the politicians committing 'seppuku' anytime soon, do you. Thanks for the info.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Guanta, where have you been, i haven seen you on my page for sometime, so good to see you,

and thank you for commenting, somehow i was thinking about the "Pillow of Salt.

well yesterday I was at work when the Earthquake /tremor hit

and...right away I was thinking of death...


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Guanta 5 years ago from New York City

Hi Darknlovely3436, I guess I have been enjoying the summer now that I'm retired I don't have to take the subway in the middle of the heat, so I have been going to the park alot and sitting in the shade. I do have to get back to reality sometime soon though. I'm glad you made it through the tremor. Good to hear from you.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Love how it is read by this man..

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