Hello, are you there?

hello, are you there?
still hoping though im constantly aware
you never could understand
the reason for my indecision

your eyes shine a different glare
and its dazzled me until now
for love had covered mine
but the burden i have laid down


you look at me with a different stare
as you walk away in complete silence
the reason why i seem invisible to you
i could tell only if you cared


hello, are you there?
still wondering how it went wrong
baby, i need more words to declare
the reason for my indecision


your words still surround me
your voice i could never forget
your presence still haunts me
oh, without a sign of regret

hello, are you there?
still walking this path unknown
it will lead me to you again
it will hurt me once more...

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misslee 5 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

I can never read any of your poems just once, they are so ripe with emotions layered upon emotions, it's just hypnotic.


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

=) and now my ego has been inflated to a level where it can burst anytime. lol. thank you! no one has ever referred to it as "hypnotic" before. means a lot!


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La Papillon 5 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

When someone puts so much soul and passion into their poetry, which then touches the soul of another, you can be proud of what you write - let it feed the ego :) :)

Cheers, Louise ;)


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

whoa, that is so kind of you. like in spanish they say, muchas gracias!

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