Hello? ~lost calls that echo back and forth

Hello ? Am I still sleeping ?

Or am I dreaming of you?

I can call out your name

In the darkest nights

Yet can you hear me?

Can you hold me when I whisper?

When I tremble from the cold

Or is it just a hide and seek

Game to you?

Again and again I call

The rain clouds come to me

Instead, the dark holds me

Tighter and tighter

IT squeezing

Hello can you read my mind

Agonizing wind silences my screams

Can you hear me?

Can you sense me?

Do I even look like I am breathing ?

So can you hold me?

Do you hear me?

I fall yet I find no one

To hold me to catch me

Am I awake?

Am I dead?

Or a glass ready to break?

Can you see the light

Can you see it in my eyes?

Do you cry when I cry?

Or is it me alone?

The little violin

And the broken note?

Can you fix me?

Can you cure a broken heart?

Are you even there?

Or am I on my own?

The coldness crushes me

Tears my heart

IT makes me tremble

Can you feel me?

Can you see me?

The silence is burning

It makes me shout

My knees dance to the rhythm

Yet my heart won’t beat

And you won’t catch me

When I crash and burn


Is it me you’re looking for?

Or am I just a shadow of the past?

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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

This poem is a rythmic lyric,Uriel;)

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

i didn't see that :P just wrote and published what i felt thanks for the support :D

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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

loved it.

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

VizFact & Nikki Thanks for your comments :D

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