Her Intuition

It can't be taunted or teased.

It won't stop until its pleased.

The truth is its only game.

It won't stop until it puts a face with a name.

It can always find the lipstick on his collar.

Causing her to study it like a forensic science scholar.

It makes her search his phone for numbers that were erased away.

And to write them down like she was composing an essay.

She can detect a scent of another woman's perfume.

When it hits the air as he walks through the room.

Her intuition is hard to contain.

The constant knowing is driving her insane.

The final straw is when she used a black light on the bed.

It confirmed her suspicions causing psychotic thoughts to race through her head.

She ran to the bar to pour herself a drink.

It calmed her down so she could think.

She decided to place a nanny cam on the top shelf.

She then wrote a note and for a few days she left.

When she returned she was scared to look.

But she forced herself to replay the video and one frame is all it took.

A face that looked so familiar.

That is why her secretary acted so peculiar.

Rage is what she felt when she saw them together.

Revenge was her only endeavor.

Her intuition proved her right.

All of a sudden her future looked really bright.

Her first thought was to slit their throats but she decided to work out something better.

He was going to pay and be made to wear the scarlet letter.

She took out his clothes and ironed on a large red patch of the letter "A".

Laid them out on the bed to see what he had to say.

When he saw this his eyes filled with tears as he tried to tell a lie.

She told him with a smile that he was pathetic because he started to cry.

He screamed out, " I'm sorry! I don't know what else to say?

Please baby, I will never see her again and this will all end today!"

And then she calmly said, "Sorry is not a word to use for what you have done.

And now for all of the years that I put into this marriage, I am going to empty you out just for fun.

My intuition told me to marry a man without a prenup."

She smiled again and said, " It really comes in handy with proven evidence leading to an unfaithful breakup."

Finding it hard to further contain her rage, she kicked him between the legs and walked out the door.

In severe pain he reached out to her and immediately fell to the floor.

He held his crotch in disbelief.

As a reminder that it caused him so much grief.



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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This was just terrific! And I love the ending too! I hope he didn't put her up on an assault charge! LOL! Awesomeness!


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NauticaBalefire 5 years ago from IL

Again you have cast your spell over me! Excellent work!


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sassyk73 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI Author

Sometimes people feel that they can change that person. They blame themselves for their behavior and feel that they deserve to be treated that way. Just like with a horrible job, a person becomes complacent in that relationship.

I know when I was in that situation I felt like it was all my fault and that I could change him. Everyone was telling me what he was doing but I could not believe anyone. I felt that it was not in his design to be with a other women.

We all wake up in our own time. I woke up and realized what was going and walked away. I am sorry that this happened to you. I am happy to hear that you had the strength to process it and walk away. Thank you for stopping by and sharing.


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Sassy , as a man , I understand the the natural instincts of a guy and a women! But I could never understand why anyone puts up with this behavior for more than once! Its the most painful thing in the world - to have someone cheating on a marriage. Been there and seen that....it was my last straw!.....Great write!....:-}


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sassyk73 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI Author

@Spirit Whisperer...thank you for stopping by. I am so honored that you enjoyed reading it. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. I hope all is well.

@Romancer...Hey girl! How are you? I am so glad you stopped by. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words. You made my day :) Well I will visit you at your book signing and you can visit me at mine. You know you are an excellent writer.

@night....I am so glad that you stopped by. I am glad that you enjoyed reading my hub. It is always a pleasure to see you.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

A wonderful read, great imagery great rhythm hope to read more :)


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

Oh my goodness...! This is brilliant! See girl... so full of beautiful talent. This is your calling sweety. Your forte... I really think you should be a writer. A full blown writer. You have what it takes to write best sellers! I for one would be your #3 fan. You know... After your husband and son! *laugh*

You are truly amazing... Loved it!

~ Romancer~


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

Wow, sassyk, this is a great story and told very effectively. I was held all the way through and could see him buckle to the floor as the foot connected with the snake that would not stay in the cage! Brilliant!


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sassyk73 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI Author

Thank you Mike :) I am so happy that you stopped by. Your comments are always so powerful and encouraging. It is always a pleasure to see you.

@Denise. You are too kind. Thank you for stopping by. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

What a story! I'm awed by your genius. Well done, Sassy. Enjoyed.


Aka Professor M 5 years ago

@sassyk73:This immediately had the adage "Hell hath No Fury like a Woman Scorned!" which the more I read the more it was confirmed, Karen!

This was powerfully written and expertly orchestrated in a Prosaic Poetic manner which highlighted the strongest elements of both styles, my friend.

You have mastered this style for it communicates with impact and yet is very descriptive in the rhythm and rhyme format! Voted Up and Pushed all the right tabs on this Karen. Well done!

Regards Mike (Aka Professor M!) ;D

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