Her Beauty Was Really Breathtaking (limerick)

I met a young girl other day

Her beauty took my breath away

My dreams they did soar

As never before

As passed out on floor I did lay


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travmaj 2 years ago from australia

She took your breath away big time..hope she gave you mouth to mouth resuscitation...


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tirelesstraveler 2 years ago from California

The perfect place to impress someone, the floor. Very Good. Voted up


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Wow! She must have really been something!


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Only a poet can show us the real vibrations of this wonderful existence that we call life. Humorously, you have taught us how we should savor beauty. A very beautiful verse. Voted up.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Someone call a doctor! LOL.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Does anyone know CPR???


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teaches12345 2 years ago

Beauty knocked you for a loop!

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