Bathbeads ...bubbles and breasts

A womans beauty shows most in little
unseen observations
When no one is looking .....she lets her
guard down in relaxation

She moves across the room
and kicks off her heels
Takes a deep breath to change her mind
to alter the way she feels

Empty walls stand transfixed as
she drops her clothing in piles
Listen to the water running as she
disrobes completely and smiles

Her beauty lights up and an aura settles
across the allibaster shades
As she slides slowly into the water
in the one sigh she's made

Ahh ...to be the silky water that enfolds
against her tender flesh
Bath beads..... and bubbles ......and beauty
where all things imagined enmesh






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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Lovely, I kept thinking of the song, 'Tiny bubbles' while reading this...Cheers


Akune 4 years ago

Smile


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Great poem, Will really relate to all the women hubbers. Nice expression.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Mmmmmmm... I adore a hot bath! I could almost feel the steam - on a couple of levels! lol Very well done. Sexy too!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Loved every line and thrilled with every word. To be the silky wat?r... such a creative thought. There's a Latvian song where a guy wishes he could be a button on a ladies blouse.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

uh uh, what a beautiful sight...languid...


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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

Your words like "silky water" capture this moment in a fluid visual where we feel compelled to watch also. But not only do you capture this smooth transition of disrobing, sighing and sensual submersion, you observe for us a change - the letting go of the days tensions as our bathing beauty takes a deep breath and relaxes with anticipation of her pending pleasure. Your attention to detail, Ahorseback and your skill for capturing a moment's mood, motion and sensuality in words, is amazing. Just amazing!!!

I have said it before and I say it again - you are a master poet. My votes and awe to you!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi Always have youu been singing in the tub with champaigne again!lol.....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Akune .....Did I cause that ?....lol....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Cleaner , Sometimes .....thats why I write !..lolThanks.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Im karn , as usual your comment leaves me speechless..LOL...thank you for that image.....:-}


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Lol..read any good I'mKar'n lately?


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savanahl 4 years ago

Very beautiful and sensual yet serene. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy rose , As long as I could be the button sewn on the inside .........:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Raciniwa , Perhaps the curse us writers live with . All these beautiful 'sights' inside lol....:-}Thank you .


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Fennelseed , Hi annie ! You my girl are too kind !Have you been doing well ? Our thoughts are with you my friend.......:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

ImKarn , Yes !....he he .


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Savanah Be sure to treat You! like this . Every woman should know just how beautiful she is ! Im glad you shared !.....:-}

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