Higher than the Rooftop

Fallin'...


It’s twenty-five after six and the sky still has some shades of purple and orange…oh well just like me, I am standing here, in this secretive rooftop, overjoyed…yet there are still some fragments of fear and haze... I wonder if the sky is glad and excited about the night or if it is crying over the bright day that passed.


But I am here counting down for the end of the day, waiting for the night.


Finally, the sky is all black. And it’s just me, with my choco crème frappe, in this beautiful rooftop. It is such an amazing view seeing all the houses nearby, illuminating different lights. I wonder how many people inside those houses feel what I am feeling in this instant…strangely elevated.


It is such a fantastic feeling, being in a soaring place under the stars…higher than everything and everyone else. The gentle wind blows bringing chills to me but I don’t mind. I look up above the dark skies, instantly recognizing my favorite star…I remember you…how my wish has come true.


A thought of you always makes me smile. I don’t remember when it started. All I know for now, I want to make you happy. You’re the reason for my smile…even so I get scared sometimes…Like the gentle wind that kisses my skin right now, bringing chills…but I don’t mind.


And so I am standing here, in this reserved rooftop, overjoyed…I might fall any moment…I might hurt…or even die…but I don’t care because right now, I am falling…


…higher than the rooftop…



***about 7pm, 14112009

under the stars...




Don't Miss the Next Parts:

2 Missing...

3 Lost in the Rain...

4 The Guest...

5 Alone Together...

6 Your Silence...

7 The Kiss...

8 The Haze...

9 Fireworks...


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wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

There is nothing more magnificent than to gaze upon a sunset in an unobstructed view. Great visualization here.


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

yep...

thanks wesley ;p


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keira7 7 years ago

I really enjoy reading your hub, Beautiful writing. Thanks for this lovely voyage.:) God Bless my dear friend.


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

glad to see you again Keira ;p

thanks my friend and God bless you always ;p


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

Really enjoyable read, thanks!


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Invictus! you're one of my fave poet here on HP ;p


ralwus 7 years ago

I like that photo, very striking. Keep the high. Enjoyed this and someone is very lucky. Peace, CC


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

like the pic, too ;p

thanks ralwus!


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Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

Love those moments. The sky is one of our greatest gifts. Thanks Blaise


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Jess! and kill me now if I'd lie about that.. :)


Justine76 7 years ago

nice....falling higher then the rooftop....loved this


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

:)

thank you Justine! glad you loved it


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wolfpack5 7 years ago from Alberta Canada

Hi blaise, that was a great hub. you are a romantic and thats just cool :) take care my friend


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blaise25 7 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you wolf! :)

that's the second time you said I'm romantic LOL

TC


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Run Down Battery 6 years ago from UK

Life is all about 'The moment' and you captured your moment exquisitely!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

oh wow thank you for that wonderful comment, RDB! :)


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

It's lovely the way you capture that feeling of being in a hidden great place where no one else sees what you see, but it's real and it's incredible, and you almost get that giddy feeling. I could sense this reading this! I love this, really captures the moment. "Higher than the rooftop..." I love that line. Magic!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Wow, with this comment, I feel like I am standing in a fabulous contest right now like American Idol, hearing stunning critiques from a respected and famous star :) Glad I caused some magic. Thanks a lot my friend :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

So descriptive and filled with the essence of being up so high and overlooking the area around you as you contemplate. Blaise, you are the cream of poets. I love your wonderful easy style. XX


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

My gosh cream of poets?! (blinking..) That's one huge compliment Cath. Thank you. :) Hope you read the next.. :)

Have a higher than the rooftop day moi friend :)


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

I loved Fallin. I was right up there with you.

Cheers


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Glad to bring you up there my friend ;) Thanks


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

lovely! "falling higher that the rooftop"! I love it. will be reading the rest.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Nikki. You take care, you might fall lol


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

I might fall...in love with your writing! lol


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I thought you've fallen..with my writings already lol

Yours are beautiful. I'm so happy to be a real fan.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I thought you've fallen..with my writings already lol

Yours are beautiful. I'm so happy to be a real fan.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

haha yea I have. I've fallen and I cant get up!

and thank you so much. We are fans of each other!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

(pulls you up) there my vampire, you're up now lol


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

hehe lol thanks


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh, that was so expressive and I absolutely loved the flow of words, caressing like a feather, wow, how beautiful!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh it made me wanna grab a choco frappe right now hehe :) Thank you for the amazing words, Max. I hope you'll feel the feather flow on the rest too :) You're awesome!


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markdarmafall 3 years ago from Moundsville,WV

That was an amazing hub that truly captured the moment. Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day

Mark


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Mark :)

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