Hummingbird Haiku

Since so many people out there on the Hub Pages seemed to have enjoyed my first two haiku poems here on the Hub Pages, I have decided to write yet another one for everyone. This is a fragile look at the life of a little hummingbird through the flowing words of a haiku. Seventeen syllables carefully put together to form one beautiful story. It's all here for you to enjoy.

Hummingbirds hover

Among the scarlet flowers

They are quite content

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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia


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Minnetonka Twin 21 months ago from Minnesota

Nice job on the Haiku and great choice on using the elusive hummingbird. Voted up and hit many buttons.

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Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

Wonderful poetry.

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manatita44 21 months ago from london

Beautiful and such a loving image. Much Love.

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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia

The only criticism Poet, is that you would do better if you put a collection of your lovely haiku together in one least three or four, because they are so short.

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FlourishAnyway 21 months ago from USA

I feed them in my backyard and enjoy trying to catch a glimpse.

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Kathleen Kerswig 21 months ago

Contentment - that's a beautiful thing. Thank you for sharing. Voted up! Blessings!

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Rachel L Alba 21 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

How perfect that picture is.

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Matt Easterbrook5 21 months ago from Oregon

Very awesome photograph. Keep up the great action photos.

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aviannovice 21 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Truly an amazing bird with so many interesting qualities.

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DaphneDL 19 months ago from Saint Albans, West Virginia

I've always loved the hummingbirds!!

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Shivendra Tiwari 18 months ago from New Delhi, India

quite interesting with perfect picture.

authenticz 14 months ago


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