Breaking My Heart - Hurting Haiku

i’m breaking my heart

is it the right thing to do

do it for me please


churning guts and heart

and i the one who said go

on my own again


on hearing your voice

I know it was right so why

do I feel so low


some days are just fine

up and down like a yoyo

hope the string is strong

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tonymac04 7 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful Russ - you are so good at these! I am rather envious!

Love and peace

Tony


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erin boote 7 years ago from Wilkes Barre, Pennsylvania

Russ,, that was touching, what a way you have of making others feel what you feel...im finally getting the hang of the hub and wrote a second poem yesterday...keep these heartfelt ones coming..


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thank you, you too!


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maven101 7 years ago from Northern Arizona

Russ....Wonderful use of the 5-7-5 meter...are you sure you don't have a Japanese poet somewhere in your family tree..?

Thank you for this ...exquisite, my friend...Larry


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thanks Larry, much appreciated! (:


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Paper Moon 7 years ago from In the clouds

I am a big fan of Haiku. Loved this.

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