I Cried Out And No One Answered

I cried out and no one answered.
I sought yet never found.
I gave myself unto thee.
And was crushed upon the ground.


My dreams once were vivid.
My soul a ray of light.
Now I stand alone and lost.
Wandering blindly in the night.



I hold my hand outstretched.
Waiting for a reassuring touch.
Hope now is fading.
Why did I expect so much?


I close my eyes to rest.
Hoping for some peace at last.
My heart forever broken.
Dwelled too long in the past.

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Charles Hilton 5 years ago

Evocative and poignant. Well done!


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Eternal Evolution 5 years ago from kentucky Author

Thank you Charles, I wrote this one restless night while on the computer with nothing to do.


kikkibabes 5 years ago

This sounds just like me, I was also stuck in the past but I'm finally moving on.. Amazing hub thanks for sharing this.. X


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Beberlee 5 years ago from Philadelphia

Awesome poem. :)


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Eternal Evolution 5 years ago from kentucky Author

Thank you Beberlee

Kikkibabes I'm slowly trying to move away from my past but it still haunts me. Letting go sometimes is the hardest thing to do.


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jimagain 5 years ago from Hattiesburg, Mississippi

I voted UP and AWESOME! Well thought out and well said!


kikkibabes 5 years ago

Yes i know that feeling sweetie.. Im also trying to do the same but yes your right it is the hardest thing to do and can drag you down more!! Stay strong and im sure we will get there one day. x


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

tragic, sad yet so beautifully written...

loved it


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carolp 5 years ago from Switzerland

Alone and sad, don't give up. Somewhere, anywhere there is hope. Thanks for sharing this feeling of emotion.


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DavePrice 4 years ago from Sugar Grove, Ill

Succinct, piercing, a deep glimpse behind the veil. Beautifully done.

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