I Hit The Bottle...

Have You Been There ?

I try to keep my mind on other things

Thoughts I would have never of thought enter in

The more my mind strays the more I need a drink

My mind comes full circle again

The way the light shines against the liquid

A simple perfection

So unique

So complete

Different than anything I have ever known

Changing each experience as I have grown

I need a drink

I can't wait

What a pleasure when it is pressed against my lips

I feel the moisture rise

As I swallow savoring each gulp

A taste like no other

The ultimate thirst quencher for hot day

Pass me the bottle

Better yet leave it on the table

It won't be long before.....My sparkling water is gone

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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Water is definitely good for you :-)


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

kidscrafts Water does the body good.It hits the spot.Thanx so much for reading and commenting.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Creatively done. Here I thought you were talking about a glass of wine for inspiration.


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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

Aw, and there's me thinking.....! lol!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee It doesn't mean there can't be another bottle.It is whatever your body and heart desire.Water does it for me.I love mine nice and cold.Chilled just right.Neil Rose I love when all our brains our thinking at once.I see sparks fly like the Fourth of July.Thanx so much for reading and having fun.


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epbooks 3 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

...Speaking of which, I need to "hit the bottle" right now. I love water. Cute poem!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

epbooks You posted at the perfect time I just finished mine.Thanx so much for reading and sharing.Enjoy a wonderful night.


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Michael-Milec 3 years ago

Hi dream- on.

Great idea: water during these warm- hot days, water before breakfast, water a life giving substsnce .

Voted interesting.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Great hub and so thoughtful water is the best and won't let you down


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tammyswallow 3 years ago from North Carolina

This is very cute. :)


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Michael-Milec I never was a big water drinker until I met my wife.She would drink water all day long.Now whereever I go I bring a water with me.DDE I even throw a Crystal light flavor packet in to give it a nice twist.tammyswallow I love making water the apple in my eye.It keeps us healthy and feel great.Thanx everyone for your comments.It took me a long time to get back to all of you I had some computer glitches.Thanx for being so supportive.

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