I Love You... even after "Goodbye"

It tears me up inside to know that I'll never be the one for you.

I'll find some way to understand.
I'll find some way to understand.

the day is slowly dying before my eyes
and darkness unveils the heartaches i have kept
silently creeping into a chaos of nothingness
whispers of love unsaid


how do you define a last hug?
how do you describe a last kiss?
stealing away my everything
that i will surely miss


i have always believed in the word "love"
but now it feels so empty
and plain like a hollow echo
crushing my always broken heart


i can now spell the word "goodbye"
and with the perfect tone
destiny has brought me on this end of line
and i only wish i could find myself a home


i thought that day will be the end of my life
but the love i have for you
keeps me hoping for a better day
even after the "goodbye" that i just know


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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bmcoll3278 4 years ago from Longmont, Colorado

Great job as always.Voted up


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow! Thank you bmcoll3278! Thank you for reading my poem.


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rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

Sad and beautiful poem. Voted up!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Rdsparrowriter. :)


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Dawnrichard 4 years ago

Nice,wow,hats off, and an awesome poem.

Thanks for sharing.

Dawnrichard


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Dawnrichard..im so thrilled to read your comment, thank you soooo much!


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Dawnrichard 4 years ago

You are welcome dear and i want to see more from you.

Dawnrichard


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

awesome words..sounds as though you lost someone you loved via death after a long illness or coma where words were not spoken,being unable to finalize your good-bye.

We must take consideration how short life is..great poem, very sad though...voted up..


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Dawnrichard,you're such a beauty. Thank you so much, coming from my heart.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello kj force. Nice to hear from you. such another heartbreak in life. Unending tearing of a broken soul.

Thank you very much kj.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem as always.

Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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anam hasib 4 years ago from lucknow

that was a nice one..:)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you very much Joyce! :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Anam..Thanks for reading! Very much appreciated.


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Rhyz 4 years ago from The Other Dimension of Time

Very powerful words. i love you, goodbye. the saddest word in the english language.


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago

This poem has touched me deeply. If Love is a Universal emotion, then the pain it often causes is equally Universal. Yet, that only begs the more important question: Why do sad poems of love and loss (any type of loss) bring each of us; the readers, some comfort? There is no true answer to that. I would simply say: While there's a heart in me, They'll always be a part of me. And you have done just that, in such a beautiful way. Voting up :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Rhyz.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wowthank you so much Jangaplanet. You made me think on your question, i just realized it now.

Thank you for that very wonderful comment.


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Esther Earl 4 years ago

Voted up...so lovely.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks much mush!


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Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

i feel the hurt unknown spy.... just be strong ! lot


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Lot. Really appreciate this.


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Quite enjoyable, the people and relationships we have never truly fade away from our hearts. Great poem, voted up.


Helena Mikala 4 years ago

Beautiful x


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks Jon. Much appreciated :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Helena (love the name..) Thank you so much!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

This is beautiful.. it is the same question I have been asking..

voted up

and sharing

Debbie


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow Thank you so much Debbie! Really much appreicated.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

how do you define a last hug?

how do you describe a last kiss?

stealing away all my everything

that i will surely miss

Oh wow, how could you write like that?! This is so heartfelt yet sad. You painted your pain so beautiful even goodbye won't say bye..

Voted up!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Oh Blaise, your such an angel.. Thank you thank you so much for this extra wonderful message! :)


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

very touching and deep, keep writing


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

You won't just give up, won't you spy!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks much Girishpuri! God bless!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hahahaha!, my dear friend Rah..well.. :) if he'll give my heart back, which i doubt.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Your sad words paint a picture of your torn heart has it loses the love it once knew,only to be left with a hurtful goodbye,just because you loved someone more than they ever loved you .

Vote up and more !!!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yeah Kashmir..long time ago..and the scar will always be there.

thank you for reading! xoxo,M.


azlan 4 years ago

nice hub again,and what does M stand for?


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Azlan! Hey, nice to see you here again. M stands for the first letter of my name.

xoxo,M.


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

A very emotional poem, can definately feel the range of emotions. Nicely done, spy! :) Voted up and more.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much TToombs08!


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ananceleste 4 years ago from California

Lovely my dear. Love... the greatest mystery. The greatest sacrifice.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Anan, thank you very very much :)


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fivesenses 2 years ago from new delhi

Very beautiful and from the heart.


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unknown spy 2 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you much fivesenses.

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