I Love You in Thai

Up at the top
in room number 9 -
we snuggled together
our love so sublime -
your heavenly touch
sent my tail in a spin -
your lips and your love
made me warm from within.

Up in our bed
in room number 9 -
we broke all the rules
with your body so fine -
your velvety skin
and your warm summer eyes -
I swam in your ocean -
I flew in your skies.

Copyright (c) 2012 Cathy Nerujen
Copyright (c) 2012 Cathy Nerujen

Right at the top
in room number 9 -
you made me Adobo -
we drank and we dined -
Then later we shopped -
bought dresses and lace -
then back to our bedroom
where we picked up the pace.

So now at the top
here in room number 9 -
I'm tasting your love -
and your lips taste like wine -
I whisper so softly -
in a permanent high -
"Phom rak Khun", baby -
I Love You - in Thai.


Dedicated with my usual smiles and love to Fehl Dungo. This a sort of follow-up poem to "Summer Night of Love"...almost like the day after. Enjoy my romantic poetry.

Copyright (c) 2011-2016 Cathy Nerujen. All rights reserved. This love poem is published as part of a forthcoming book of romantic poetry by Cathy Nerujen, to be published in late 2016. More details at www.flashstarmagazine.com

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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

I loved this poem! Great the way you rolled it out and nailed it in the end:). Up and Suoer awesome and all that!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi RealHousewife: wow, first comment to you. :) Thank you for this, I had fun writing it, and I even managed to stick in the Thai part at the end too. Thank you for the votes. Wow, I think you even tweeted this for me too. Aw you get hugs for that. You're awesome.

"Salamat" ... that's Philippine for "Thankyou". (I'm very multi-lingual today... LOL.)

Cathy. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

I'm in cloud 9 but then I wanna be in Room no. 9 ;) This is so beautiful and breathtaking..and Phom rak Khun, baby. I'm speechless..as I'm chatting with my Firefly right at this very moment :)

Mwah!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

We will book it again, and order extra everything. LOL. Um, I love you saying this... Oh I am blushing now.... hehehe...

Speechless.... thank you baby. :) Yes, I am on FB and there you are... Heh...


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Yup, I already booked it, babe. :) We're in FB and here..we're crazy :) Mwah!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Oh Fehl, I am in Heaven already... :) Wow...that number is etched in my brain now forever... LOL. Pillows await me and soft fluffy blankets... ;)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

Awesome!!! This was sweet and sultry. Beautiful and sexy. That room number 9 must have seen a lot of action...if only walls could talk. lol


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Lusciously delicious.;)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Nikki, wow... room 9 will be booked out for the rest of the year now. LOL. Well, in my mind it has, and while it's a figurative sensed numbered room and place, it feels real because of the lovely amazing things that happen inside...

I hope the walls are thick enough. We had no complaints, put it that way. Hehehe. :D

Hi Bryan, those two words perfectly describe the lewd conduct of the two people in this lascivious poem. And I am happy with that. LOL. :D


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is full of romance and adventure. Room nine seemed to be a lovely place. Thank you for sharing......


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

????????

I dunno if that text appears.. but would be a great tattoo ;)


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well I love you too .... not just for your sublime words but for the beautiful genuine person that you are!

(Cassie too, and yes I kinda got the hots for BLAISE 25, tell her to call me .....)

lake erie timeless for you three sweet ladies because love is love , no matter what shape or form or gender or genre .......but if you really want to know it's 12:08am by my lake with good thoughts and warm wishes of you and a touch of fall in the air although I still go into the lake everyday until the end of the month!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Ruby, yes my room number 9 is getting a lot of requests from people. LOL. Maybe I should have re-titled this to Room 9 or something. Yes, our imaginations run riot in room 9! Thank you Ruby. :)

Hi Fehl, oh the words seem to work better in some fonts than for others. If you have Angsana, you'll get it okay. Yes, I'd love to have it tattooed somewhere on me. :D Can you suggest any places? Heh. Mwaaaaaahhh. :) XOXOXOXOX

Hi Colin, aw that is so sweet... heh... thank you so much. :) Wow, Cassy will be pleased too, and Blaise is always here ... hots for her? I'm feeling a little envy now, Colin. Hehehe.

Well Lake Erie sounds calm and tranquil and seems to rise above it all in its own inimitable style and place... I love that. You are so lucky to live by a beautiful lake. :) Warm hugs for you too, Colin. Yes, Love is Love... no mater what. Be careful in Erie and stay safe and well, okay? Mwah. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Yes, let me tattoo it on you..Not gonna tell here where. LOL Mwaaahhh! :)

Hi Colin! Wow, my name in capslock Hehe Lake Erie sounds magical. And your words were like my fave Dj's from a midnight radio station..while we ladies were in room number 9 ;)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hehehe.... Tattoo it where? Tell me. Oh Fehl. So it's not a usual place, haw? LOL. You are such a tease, baby... :) XOXOX

Colin has the hots for you... maybe he could be "Alfred" and bring us breakfast at room 9, and with his amazing poetry, like limericks. Heh. OMG that is so funny... :D


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stayingalivemoma 5 years ago from Tempe, Arizona

You are an extraordinary poet. My girls write poetry too and I can really appreciate the heart and soul that goes into a poem. Good job!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi stayingalivemoma, what a cool name you have. :) Thank you for the nice comment. My poems are mostly romantic or love poems. Wow, I got encouraged to write poetry a lot as a kid. Rhyming or non-rhyming, I enjoy lots of styles of poetry. Thank you for reading and checking me out. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Tattoo it where ONLY my lips could blow it as it dries up..Not gonna tell here,baby.. :) XOXOXO

He has the hots for me? He’d forget bout me when he sees Peachy. LOL Now that’s funny.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Oh wow...okay, Fehl...just um...email it to me, so... Heh. Tell me there. :)

Oooh Peachy... wow, you are so funny today. :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Gosh so romantic. I always love your poetry Cathy.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi acaetnna, I am sooooo romantic these days. Heh. :) Wow, you are a great fan. Thank you for the lovely comments. Have a sweet day. :)


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Highvoltagewriter 5 years ago from Savannah GA.

Great poem, now I will have to read more!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Highvoltagewriter, thanks you for checking out my new poem. Enjoy my other romantic poetry too. :)


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TattooKitty 5 years ago from Hawaii

Sweet poem! I love chicken adobo!!


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

All the world and his aunt want room number 9 now!!

Beautifully written a always.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi TattooKitty: thank you for this. I have tried Adobo once and I loved it too' :)

Hi Dim: You have to really book ahead for room number 9, as it's awfully popular all of a sudden. LOL. Thank you, Dim. :)


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

Book me in room number 9, no more walking on air,cloud nine or seventh heaven...and call room service for a bowl of delicious chicken adobo :)

BTW I love adobo, Is Thai adobo different from the way we cook it here in the Philippines? I enjoy cooking and would appreciate the recipe for Thai adobo. Thanks :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi SilentReed, your comment made me smile. It is Chicken Adobo, philippine style.I tried it recently for the first time and I love it. There are lots of different chicken meals in Thai cuisine. I love anything that sis sweet chicken like cilli chicken or sweet and sour, or pickled or spicy.

I love Thai food. LOL. :)


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IreneMarieW 5 years ago

As usual, you did an amazing job. You have a beautiful way with words.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi IreneMarieW, you make me smile today, thank you for the kind comments. My words go to um...amazing places. Heh. :)


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

Great poems. Very beautiful. :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi carolinemd21, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a sweet day.


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trusouldj 4 years ago from Indiana

Very sexy ... I need to take a cold shower :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you trusouldj. LOL.


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alocsin 4 years ago from Orange County, CA

An excellent poem evoking the joy of love. I liked how you worked in one of my favorite dishes, adobo. Voting this Up and Beautiful.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi alocsin: yes, the poem is about love and two people sharing together.

Wow, your comment is very apt, as today I cooked Chicken and Pork Adobo for my whole family and for Cheeky Girl (that's her Hub Pages name) and her Grandmother too. All very satisfied customers. :)

Thank you for the vote too. :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Hot, hot, so alluring and romantic poem, beautiful!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi BeyondMax, thank you for loving this poem. :)


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Good language lesson! I hasted to tell my wife in Thai that I love her. She said "Who taught you that?" She speaks Thai as one of her eight languages, and I equally hastily told her where my language lesson had originated. Thanks for a sweet moment and a chuckle.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Perspycacious. Thank you for the funny story about the language. Heh. I'm glad it had the desired affect. The Thai language is a nice language, even if this is a poetry hub. LOL. I guess it proves you can put more into a hub than just mere love poems. :)


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Nice piece that makes me want to practice my Thai like you did... :)

This poem sure is tee dee sOOt... Cathy!

Well written and smooth imagery... lovely... take care ... PD


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Pearldiver, Thai is a nice language to speak and learn. I appreciate the nice compliment here and the language of it too. LOL.

Have a sweet day. :)


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Sawadee krup Cathy, yes it is a beautiful language and culture to learn... and the compliment (maybe spelled wrong) was sincere... enjoy the love you find, when you find you love.... take care... PD


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you for the lovely comments on my hubs. There are so many ways to phonetically spell Thai that its fine. And yes I have found a beautiful love... Have a sweet day, Pearldiver.


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Lady_E 3 years ago from London, UK

Beautiful read. I enjoyed it.

Adobo is now on my "new things to eat" list. :-)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Lady_E: thank you so much for reading my Thai love poem. Yes, please do try Chicken or Pork Adobo. It is a national dish of the Philippines. The lady that this poem is about is from the Philippines, a very beautiful country.

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