I Miss You When You're Away

Hungry for love
Hungry for love
Beautiful flowers
Beautiful flowers
Your moist emotional kiss
Your moist emotional kiss
I miss you when we are apart
I miss you when we are apart
Candle lit meal
Candle lit meal
Together we are complete
Together we are complete

I Miss You When You're Away

When my Truelove goes away - even for a day I miss him so much. He is always with me in my heart and attached to my soul, but I feel so much more complete when he is physically with me.

A love like ours is everlasting and complete . . .


I MIss You When You're Away


Flowers that mean so much

Always a symbol of our love

A perfect bouquet, my favourite colours

Lilac, pink and as white as a dove


How you always remember

Each special day

And spoil me

In every perfect way


Your sweet note in my purse

Remind me of our love so true

Every moment you are away

Inscribed ‘I love you’


Your soft tender lips kissing goodbye

Our day's so long when we are apart

Happy am I to hear your key in the lock

When you return to me sweetheart


Your arms tight around me

And the warmth of your touch

Whispering words I've longed to hear

How you’ve missed me so much


A candle lit meal

With our favourite wine

Together again to share every moment

Of our blissful romance, yours and mine


With hungry anticipation

Looking into my eyes once more

Caressing my hand

We lead each other to the bedroom door


Slowly we kiss and entwine

Your soft gentle touch

This feeling of complete harmony

We've needed so much


We make love through the night

Sharing our joy

Whispering our longing

For a new baby boy

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epigramman 6 years ago

....well my dear sweet 'love doctor' you could cure anyone's ails or woes with your sincere words - and it's your life affirming prescription which could make this world a far better place - I am sure that Lennon/McCartney must have inspired by your poetic prose when they wrote ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE with noble people like you in mind .......


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You always know what to say to touch a string in my heart. Thank you Epigramman. I really do think that 'all you need is love' is all that IS needed to make this world a much better place.


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warm_whispers 6 years ago

soooooooooooooo lovely ..and iam sure he reply your poem in his heart as this ....If only 1 star would fall every time I miss you, then all the stars in heaven would be gone. Don’t wonder if there are no stars tonight! It’s your fault becoz you made me miss you a lot.


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leni sands 6 years ago from UK

A wonderfully written, heartfelt poem. You really are the lucky one to have someone who loves you so much and vice versa.


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

I am speechless... I am missing someone too and I am crying! =( You are so romantic! I love your poems. See you around!


you suggest one 6 years ago

what lucky people you are to have each other,and this baby boy you will create through your love will be an extremely fortunate human being to have you both,forever cherish the love you feel for there are many things in this life that will try to darken the horizon but as long as you continue to share your love with each other you will have no fears,and on your journey together never be afraid to talk to each other.How I envy your shared love.You take care my friend.


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Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

An awesome sweet tribute to love my friend, to be able to open you heart so wide and allow yourself to trust so much is a blessing on this Earth. You are very special and I wish you always Love Love and more Love....rate up darski


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is soo beautiful. This love of giving and sharing is wonderful and the way it's susposed to be.

Cheers


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

Oh the beauty of young hearts and first loves. We never want it to end, if only EUTOPIA could secure the love you pen and never let it leave it's breast man and woman would stay together forever.

Keep doing what your both doing, it's a match made in Heaven. Fantastic, I love your sharing your hearts with us here, it brings back great memories for many of us. Hugs


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Warm_whispers that is lovely likening him missing me to stars falling from the sky. Love it and I shall have to remember that for another poem perhaps!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Leni thank you, yes I have been very blessed.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh DjBryle I do hope he hasn't gone for too long. It feels as though a part of you is missing when they are away, doesn't it.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You suggest one, lovely comments thank you. Yes I guess the baby boy part was rather wishful thinking but it seemed to fit in with the poem!! It is wonderful to be blessed with children whether a boy or girl! Your little Penny looks a little treasure.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Darlene thank you, yes I think it is important to trust, not always easy if one has experienced infidelity before. I do completely trust this relationship though. I so appreciate your visit, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I appreciate your comments, Always exploring. Many thanks.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Saddlerider I always appreciate your wise words. This is not my very first love but I know that this time it is really very special.


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Winsome 6 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

They say absence makes the heart grow fonder

Do "they" have it right I wonder

Sadder might be a more apt emotion

When the beloved object of your devotion

Goes away

At least, that's what "I" say

Lovely AC =:)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes they do say 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' but I don't want to miss a second being with this special man of mine! Wise comments too Winsome, I appreciate them.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

How beautiful. I do hope you get your baby boy as you will be such loving and wonderful parents. This poem is so wonderfully perfect and spot on as to how true love creates that longing to be together again and oh how sweet once you are. Love and Peace :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Katie. I think I was reading again some of your awesome hubs whist you were reading mine! Lovely comments from you. I so appreciate them from someone I revere as the authority on love.


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blondepoet 6 years ago from australia

Ohhhhh Acaetnna you know I am a sucker for love. I melted like butter in the frying pan reading this gorgeous piece. xo


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I feel all warm and giddy after reading this. This is just beautiful, and so sweet. Your words always move me, they mean more and do more when spoken by a person like yourself. Bless you for this amazing talent you have, and the warmth your hubs bring to everyone. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thanks Blondepoet it's great to have you back. You always leave such fun comments.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well thank you so much Astra Nomik you always sound so enthusiastic and I always appreciate your comments so much. Kind words but you are definitely a talented writer as your wonderful hubs show. I shall be over to read some more later.


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epigramman 6 years ago

...well I miss you .... when you're not writing anything 'new' .........


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well hi Epigramman - sorry you go like the pace of grease lightning with your hubs!!! I can't possibly keep up!! I love to see you here though - hope you're well.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

"Rock and roll" acaetnna! The ladies always tell me, "How can I miss you when you won't go away?!"


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow Micky, what are you saying I NEED to go away?!


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

This is so beautiful, my friend. I can't say anything. But My heart always for you and I miss you all the time. This is the best poem from you. And I love how you express you feeling about love. Love is to appreciated and how to make this so beautiful? just in your hand everything goes well and looks so beautiful. I believe, this is a gift from God and very touch my deep in my heart. Thank you very much for showing us about this.

Love and peace

Prasetio


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you Prasetio, you always write such heartfelt comments, they are lovely. I am surprised you think this is my best poem, I am wondering why? I struggled with the words as my feelings just tumbled out. I just hate being apart from the man I love. I so appreciate your visit Prasetio, thank you.


Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

Nice twist at the end with the baby reference and sweet words throughout.


RONALD OUMA  6 years ago

as i was reading it i was thinking of my love whos is away from me.. its inspiring & awesome..


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to hear from you Doug, thanks for the comments. Hope you've noticed that I removed the exclamation mark on your recommendation for 'I knew you were the one'!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hope you're not missing her too much Ronald but wont it be awesome on her return! Bet you can't wait!


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ZulmaDear 6 years ago from TheCrosses, LasCruces

awww.. beautifully written. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks so much ZulmaDear.


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This hub is bursting with love and sunshine! I love the poetry and yes, the pictures you chose. This is better than Hallmark, acaetnna! You are just amazing. Is it just me or has the "Romance" factor gone up a few notches in hubs lately? Heh! Rating this very up, and you too!


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Neil Sperling 6 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

Deep words from the soul. Sounds like the highest level love is spoken in poetry. Awesome.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Cheeky Girl well what an awesome compliment, thank you SO much. I don't know maybe the romance factor in my hubs has gone up and maybe it has in life in general too!!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Neil thank you so much for reading and commenting. I shall be over to check your hubs shortly.


Website Examiner 6 years ago

Very nice and gentle, yet with plenty of room for the imagination to work its wonders. Well done!


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

You got it so right my friend, 3/4 of me is missing when he's away... hahaha! Only 1/4 is I have left.... =( tc!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes definitely room for the imagination to work wonders - thank you Website Examiner, I always appreciate your comments.


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ellacor 6 years ago

Wow how did I miss this one? Acaetnna how do you do it? Your poetry just so sends tingles around me and I just love your romantic overtones. How I long to have a love like yours. Great poem.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks DjBryle ... it is so heart breaking when they are away. I never feel complete when he is away!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

And wow to you Ellacor. Thanks or stopping by - I always love your comments. Guess I am very fortunate that my love is here with me.


shygirl2 6 years ago

To find ones soulmate is something one should cherish and share in a poem like yours. Beautiful poetry-story, acaetnna. :) I hope you both have your dreams come true...as any deserving, loving couple should. Love is pure and wonderful when shared with the right one. :)Cool poem!!


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kashmir56 6 years ago from Massachusetts

A very beautifully written poem from the heart,I am so glad i stopped by to read this wonderful poem!

Thumbs up !!!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Shygirl, I love your comments and so appreciate you visiting my hub.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Kashmir, I am so glad you did, thank you.


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

Well acaetnna another beautiful poem clearly inspired because you are both so in love. I think it is so wonderful.


tlmntim9 6 years ago

What can I sayu but, Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes we are truly in love so that is my inspiration for this love poetry. Thank you Lovingu. I am still looking forward to reading one of your hubs!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks so much Timntim.


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maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

Such sweet sentiments from such a sweet lady...baring your heart with these heart-felt words carries your love with passion to the very end...The creation of a human being by two people in love is the ultimate expression of human existence...

May his absences be short and your love last forever...Thank you for this sweet share...Larry


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Lovely to see you here again Larry. His absences are short thankfully, usually only a few hours away but that feels like an eternity to both of us.


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

Clearly you are in love and your words are so beautiful.Another hit from you acaetnna.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Secretmission, I appreciate your words.


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Craan 6 years ago from Florida

Your words are mesmerizing! Love is so grand! You eloquently create the feeling that captures hearts. Congratulations!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Generous words from you Craan, thank you so very much.


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richtwf 6 years ago

Sensuous words of love, if we had more of you in the world sharing words like these then I'm sure the world would be a more peaceful and loving place. Keep spreading the word of love Lady A!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You are right Richtwf, the world I believe would be a far better place if we could all learn to love. Love having you here Richtwf, thank you so much.


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RNMSN 6 years ago from Tucson, Az

I still have all the love notes my David wrote just a few short 30 years ago :)

and they still make me cry with happiness when I read them over again!

Knowing you have your soul mate is a precious thing...it is still a lot of hard work, dont get me wrong but your words bring back all those wonderful first love feelings and they just grow deeper with every year!!

You are truly a gifted wordsmith acaetnna!!!


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Elefanza 6 years ago from Somewhere in My Brain

Hoping for a baby...so beautiful!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

RNMSN yes to read love letters over and over certainly bring back wonderful memories. I have treasured every word he has ever written to me. I have several boxes all tied with satin ribbon! Great to have your comments RNMSN, please take care of yourself.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Elefanza yes it would be so wonderful, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you so much Mark.


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AmyTaylor 6 years ago

oh to feel love the way you do. your so full of love it overflows into your writing...absolutly beautiful job


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PurpleOne 6 years ago from Canada

This captures the way I feel about my fiancee perfectly. Right now him and I are apart but will be together soon again.

Good luck with having your baby! I want one too. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Amy, it is a wonderful feeling, I do hope you are experiencing it too.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well I do hope that you and your fiance will be together very soon. Remember he is always present in your heart but to be without his physical touch is so difficult isn't it. Thank you for reading my poem, hope you'll be back when you have time to read some more.


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Money Glitch 6 years ago from Texas

Very nice poem and love the pictures that spice it up. Awesome tribute to the one you love. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Money Glitch (great name!) I so appreciate your comment. Yes I always think that pictures always make all the difference.


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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your life and love for those of us bouncing around the hub looking for warmth and happiness in the pages of the faces we follow. Brightest Blessings to you Both. I'm feeling Lovely :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Truly wonderful comments, thank you Erin. You really dn't know what your lovely comment really mean to me. Thank you. I am now sure to visit your hubs too.


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@MagicBoy 6 years ago from Qatar

Have you thought of publishing your work of art..or have you already..Hope I am not missing anything here..great work and wonderfully written, coming from a writer who has such lovely thoughts..Could melt any reader's heart.. cheers..


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh what a truly wonderful comment, I so appreciate that. No I have never thought of publishing anything! I only wrote my first poem about two months ago and published it on here, I don't really consider myself to be a proper poet! I am still learning but enjoying every minute of being in this friendly environment on Hubpages, people are just so lovely. I am totally flattered that you think I could do that though and so appreciate you reading my poem and making such lovely comments.I am just popping over to your hubs now though.


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Lovely, romantic poem. YOu are fortunate to have a love that is missed in this way. My love is gone, but I carry him in my heart.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so sorry your love has gone, but I agree he will always be in your heart, just as anyone who has truly loved will keep their love forever in their heart. Thank you for reading my poem Denise.


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia

Very sweet poem!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Stricktlydating, great to see you here again.


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Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

Hi acaetnna,

What a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I am so pleased for you. I can also add that I was married for 26years to a violent bully, but I left him in 2002 and said that I would never get involved again. But I met Dai and he has been my partner for five years now and that poem could have been from me to him or vice versa. He had also had a very long but unhappy marriage and I count myself as very lucky to have found him.

So enjoy your life and I am so glad to have got to know you. By the way I give this one an up and awesome.

Take care my friend .


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Dave Sibole 6 years ago from Leesburg, Oh

Another joyful read. Thanks.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Eiddwen thank you for sharing that with me. I am so pleased you have now found Dai and I hope you will be blessed with wonderful love and a blissfully happy life together. To be married to a violent bully whether emotional or physical bullying must be a prison sentence. I am so pleased you escaped.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Very many thanks Dave I am so pleased you stopped by.


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

This is really beautiful and I think with all comments above, you do not need me to tell you what you already know. Love it! Thank you for sharing this. ^_^


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Freya for reading this poem and for making such lovely comments.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

Sweet sweet verse :) You're very much in love my friend :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Blaise thank you so much for visiting me here.


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meteoboy 6 years ago from GREECE

Full of feelings .This is a piece of art!!! Thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thanks Meteoboy I really appreciate your visit and comments.


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lifewellspoken 6 years ago from Vancouver BC

I can see now why somebody would miss you.

I love this poem.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Lifewellspoken, I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.


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pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

Oh acaetnna, how romantically delicious this poem is! I love love in all its forms and you make love jump off the pages invoking such emotion. Thank you!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Love is a beautiful emotion as you well know Pennyofheaven. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this poem.


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

It's a corny thing to say, and it's been said many times, but what you have writen is so romantic; so lovely. That poem was straight from the heart. I'm going to read some more.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Twilight Lawns I appreciate your comment so much.


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Joy56 5 years ago

I hope you and your partner stay together forever. I would be far too shy to write as openly as you do. Well done lovely expressions of a great relationship.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Joy56 I hope so too. Don't be shy, I am a really shy person but I feel I can shout it to the world on Hubpages!


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devsir 5 years ago from Earth

I really miss you why you are away. Awesome Poem.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am glad to see you here Devsir - thank you for your comment.


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samiaali 5 years ago

What a beautiful poem about sweet love! I hope you always have this wonderful feeling with your heart. I loved it!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

Very romantic and with the added wish of a child it becomes a statement of life; one that we all hope for... I'm sure your husband was very happy to see this....


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Samiaali it is a wonderful feeling and I hope you are experiencing it too.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Suburban Poet, it is lovely to see you here.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

This piece of starlight has fired up my romantic mood so much. You have a gift of sharing and showing your love with such depth of emotion- He is truly a lucky guy. Wish you both the very best of the New Year!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am glad this poem has stirred the romance in you. There is nothing to beat love and romance in my opinion. I loved your visit, thank you. Have a wonderful new year.


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shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

So warm and rich this feeling of love that come through your words.. doesn't distance make the heart fonder? and the coming together is much more stronger!! beautiful!!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I certainly agree with you Shimmering Dawn. The coming together is great but it is so painful to be apart.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

you are true artist of words, this was beautiful


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you, you are always so complementary.


TattoGuy 5 years ago

Gotta say that was beautiful although tis easy to see why he loves you, just look at the comments and love for you shining through on this page. I also agree with Money Glitch, the pics really compliment it, heres hoping 2011 ends with you being a Mum ; ) x


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you TattoGuy you are always so supportive, a great friend too - someone I can rely on for positive feedback. Take care and thank you. Happy New Year to you and may all your dreams come true.


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chrissie123 5 years ago

This was absolutely amazing! marked as beautiful for sure! I really enjoyed the loving feeling from this so romantic!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Chrissie I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Any poem with 21 Awesome and 24 Beautiful votes deserves an up vote from me as well...


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Ah thank you so much Hillrider. I hope that you enjoyed the read.


hubpageswriter 5 years ago

Beautiful, acaetnna. I'm really looking forward to more of your poetic writings, for I love reading them. Love is such a beautiful topic to be explored and written. Hub up as always.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Hubpageswriter I so look forward to receiving comments from you.


not white trash 5 years ago

wow was not expecting poetry about love today in my frame of mind, thank you, sometimes I forget that my husband is a good man and I do love him. Thanks.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Husbands are very special, I hope he treats you well. Love him and he will in return mirror that love back to you. Hope to see you again, thanks so much for your comment.


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Secretmission 5 years ago from Sandwich

I miss it when I am away from your words for too long!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Secretmission.


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Dr irum 5 years ago

i miss you when you are away ,nice description by poetry .


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Dr Irum thank you so much for visiting.


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Peaceful life 5 years ago from Las vegas

wow..your poem is so beautiful like you....*_*


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so grateful for your response Peaceful Life - thank you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Jet!


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Leptirela 5 years ago from I don't know half the time

Absolutely love it

awesome (clicked)

amazing stuff, well done

and thank you for sharing with us such beauty


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Leptirela, gosh you are so amazing - thank you for your unbelievable comments.


september girl 5 years ago

You must really love your husband, acaetnna. You also sound like you are one lucky lady to have his love returned in such warm expression. Voted this one up and beautiful!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I absolutely do September Girl, he is the love of my life and I certainly appreciate just how lucky I am.

Thank you for visiting. I shall be over to check out your hubs shortly.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

acaetnna, beautiful as always. There is nothing so uplifting as the feeling of love.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

KoffeeKlatch Gals thank you. I always miss him when he is away but he certainly makes up for it on his return! It makes all the waiting so worthwhile!


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stvrich 5 years ago from East Rockaway - Long Island - Planet: Earth ~

I'm working (slowly) through your pieces. This was very sweet. I've been known to leave a note or two myself. And I loved to bring "Her" flowers- for no reason. She loves yellow. especially sunflowers. I had mentioned before that I had once had words like yours flow-aplenty from my own fingers easily. But this was not the case with everyone who was in my life. Once... only once, did a Woman move me so. She was a dark-eyed Italian/Welsh Beauty. I called her eyes "crystalline-brown". I could so easily just wax rhapsodic... I swear. I used to write and write and write to her... I referred to her OWN love of me, the expression of her heart as a: "Fiery Brazier upon which to forge my own Heart"... It literally is a "song" in your heart when you are like this. It's beautiful. (and no, I don't WANT a replacement female, in my case). There can be no such thing. It is impossible to 'replace' her. I despise the "other fish in the sea" argument. But I do miss "Her". Just as you mention the feeling here. When "gone", you simply are waiting for their return. Very Much So. Very very touching. Beautiful Work.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

What an amazingly lengthy comment from you. Thank you, I so appreciate all the care that you show through your words. I certainly agree with you that it is impossible to replace a most perfect love. My love remains for always very, very special and is completely irreplaceable.


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Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

Hi Acaetnna,

As they say that distances makes one long for the person more and dearer. I guess that holds true now...you have proved it :))

When we miss the person we love...the distances seem to become shorter and the days become longer.

Loved the beautiful yet heartwarming poetry.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Ruchira, even an hour or two apart is all it takes to miss him. It is wonderful when we reunite though, just like meeting for the first time and remembering and feeling my heart skipping a beat and butterflies in my tummy! I appreciate your visit and lovely comment, thank you so much.


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SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

This is truly lovely. You are blessed with the most beautiful subject in life... LOVE!

Take care my dear!

Sannel


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Sannel, yes I am definitely blessed, I realise that and I am so grateful.


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Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

Absence does make the heart grow fonder and makes for some happy reunions.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

You are so right Jackie, even a few hours apart makes the reunion all the sweeter. Thanks so much for stopping by.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Wow, does this man still have your heart, because you sure have mine, with your rhyming abilty with words of love, that come from your heart so true.

great poetry.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Ha ha Cleaner3 - thank you. Yes he definitely still has my heart, lucky me! Great comments, brilliant, thank you.


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Up, awesome, and beautiful. More then anything, you are truly blessed to feel this way, feeling true love. Just an absolutely beautiful poem Acaetnna. There is no better feeling in the world. You capture how wonderful it is to be loved, "truly loved" that is.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

What amazing, truly amazing comments Thelyricwriter, thank you so very much. I am sure they are not completely deserved; but I do my best and am able to do this from my total love experience. I realise that I am exceedingly fortunate and I thank God every day.


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Hyphenbird 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

This is a very beautiful poem. I know it is meant to be romantic and certainly achieves that intent. Somehow though it made me think of my best friend Beth who currently lives many hours away. I miss her all the time and wish I could see her forever smiling face. Different kinds of love remain strong don't they? Thanks for a wonderful and beautiful read.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hyphenbird thank you so much for your comment. It was meant to be romantic but I am so pleased that it evokes the feeling of loving a best friend too. I do hope that you are able to see you best friend again very soon.


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epigramman 3 years ago

The very words that I utter breathlessly to you Miss S - I miss you when you go away - and here I am sending you warm wishes and big Canadian hugs from the three of us: Colin, Tiffy and Gabriel and we are asking how you have been keeping.

I just finished a lovely dinner of baby potatoes and a rib eye steak and now for some caramel moccha layer cake . I think your writing makes me hungry for love - lol - and I must admit your words always make my world go 'round ...... lake erie time canada 6:49pm


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Epi you are awesome and your very visits make me breathless!

What wonderful company your cats must be. Your dinner sounds positvely yummy (apart from the eye rib steak!!! - I am a vegetarian!!)

Being hungry for love keeps one young - don't you think?!!!


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

So lovely...such love transports us to a place that only those who know this kind of love can feel...that perfect love that asks only that we share and adore and revel in its glory.

Thank you for sharing this.

Sending Angels your way today :) ps


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Pstraubie48 thank you so very much. The angels have certainly arrived with me today. The sun is shining and I have even more joy in my heart. Have a wonderful day today and always.


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Thelma Alberts 3 years ago from Germany

Beautiful! I like it very much. Thanks for sharing;-)


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Thelma Alberts - thank you SO much!


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sunilkunnoth2012 3 years ago from Calicut (Kozhikode, South India)

Good poetical expression. I just loved it and voted up.


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Sunilkunnoth2012 ... am making the most of my hubby now that he is back!!! Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving an awesome comment. Take care.


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DREAM ON 2 years ago

I haven't seen you for awhile. I love all your work. Great thoughts about love that bring in so many beautiful images to mind. I hope all is well. Thank you for sharing.

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