I See You- a revelation

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I See You

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


You are my breath,

and I inhale you

until my mind is saturated,

imbued with your essence.

Where I stop and you begin is unclear,

and I am whole within you,

and you within me.

You stand before me,

and I see you,

for all you are and want to be,

and I want that too.

Love does not explain you, me,

for we are something else, more.

Our cells mingle, meld,

and I recognise you beyond me,

inside me,

and I am full,

overwhelmed by your presence,

you are like a mist flowing through me,

nowhere and everywhere.

Your touch is like lightning,

yet gentle as a snowflake,

my body transfixed,

my mind sharply focused.

I see you,

like glass, like a shimmering star,

endless, inspiring, enduring,

and I am lost within your love,

within your soul.

Skin to skin, mind to mind,

soul to soul,

we are what we have been,

what we will be,

as life eternal.

I have found you.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

You're too kind. Thanks for reading Qudsia.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

This is really beautiful; you are very talented.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Gald you liked it Storytellersrus. thanks for reading and your comment.


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Very passionate love poem, reminiscent of Song of Solomon. Oh to be in lust again haha!

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