I WAIT FOREVER WITHOUT YOU: A POEM

Without you, my days are dust

My sun, once replenishing, is now parching

Tears brim my eyes but do not fall

Chest soaks in suffocation, does not breathe

There is no breeze in my night

No beauty in my moon

I choke silently without you

I never met you

yet love you

For my love is timeless

As I never saw you

I never heard you speak

but you are in my every thought

For you are not reality

That is pleasurable but fades

A broken dream

Wept for without tears

Yet eyes are ever wet

And I wait for you

still..... as all ceases

For you alone

Let my dream console

and scourge my poor heart

For I am without you

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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Fine piece`


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you awful (awesome) poet!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Voted awesome, as per usual. This captures the true lonely heart in an endless eternity.


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you aviannovice! Send me link when your poem is posted! Its been days, I miss it! Good night!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I haven't done any poems for a while. Been doing training at work. Talk later.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

oh my god ,seems these things my heart speaks also..i can feel what all are written in here. Voted up..


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JKenny 4 years ago from Birmingham, England

Wow! What a powerful poem, so emotional and passionate. Your writing style makes the emotion emanate from the page, straight into my heart. Wonderful work. Voted up :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

"Without you, my days are dust" got mesmerized in the first line itself.

Such a heart-wrenching piece of poetry!

Beautiful!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautifully sad..Loved it..


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rajan jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Touching!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you so much angelme566. So glad you liked it and to know how you feel. Have a great day!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Such lovely comments, thank you Jkenny! Thanks for the vote too! Have a good day! :)


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Your comments are always heartwarming and honest Rahul0324 that they are very flattering. Thank you! So glad you liked it!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you always exploring. Glad you liked it, it was written in a moment of extreme despair and I did not pay any attention to rhyme scheme and was very doubtful about it. Thanks for your lovely comments!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you Rajan jolly! :)


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Bye aviannovice! :) Good morning!


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Angelme566 4 years ago

i super love the picture in here..a brave woman in grief..


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

Some of us have felt this way too but have failed to express it with such passion. I could feel the pain as each word magnified the feelings. I will be back to read more.


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well I think I have waited forever to read something as moving and passionate as this - pure words of poetic reflection spoken straight from your beautiful heart - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 1:18pm


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

That good ole love bug, it gets us every time, i like this hubs flow its so poetic, and rages with passion for the love of another, that appear hard to reach. Lovely! voted up.


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you cloudexplorer for you great comments, glad you enjoyed it and for your vote. Have a great day!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you epigramman, hope Canada is good to you all there. I am very grateful for such flattering comments, hearty wishes from Christy, India, 07:18 p.m. ;) Have a sweet day there!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

I am looking forward, thank you for such sweet and kind comments. Means a lot. Have a great day pstraubie48.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

your poetry has won me over, my sweet.

it is exquisite( i think i said that before but it bears repeating) this is nice, very nice in fact.

Love ya,

Michael


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Dear Micheal, never expected something so flattering, I am enthralled by your darling comments, thank you so much. So so glad that you enjoyed. Wish you a lovely morning!


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wisdom25 4 years ago from San Tan Valley

Great poem but sad. You will find that true love. In due time. Much love and respect


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Aww.. thank you for your wishes, hope it comes true! Have a lovely day!


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Beautiful and heartfelt. I hope that I can write poetry like this someday.


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JessMcCray 4 years ago from NYC

Beautiful and heartfelt- When you said you never met the subject I got chills- reminded me of the baby I lost 4 years ago- I still cry over the miscarriage even though I divorced the father. Very moving- thanks for writing it


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Thank you so much for such amazing comments!


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

jessmcray: My condolences, I am deeply sorry for your loss, a pain more intense and powerful than that of love is the maternal pain of losing your child, you own blood! I am so glad you related and shared your pain with me. The only thing that can make a person whole after such a devastating loss in His love. May the Lord bless and keep you! My wishes for you finding the right one for you too.


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JessMcCray 4 years ago from NYC

Thank you- I'm happily re married, we can't have kids for medical reasons but I'm fine with that. GOD bless


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India Author

Glad to hear that and thanks!

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