I Want You Even More

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We share each day, we share every word of love and emotion. How deep is our love, only God and we will ever know. Is it possible to love anymore completely, when I want you even more?

This love of ours gets better and better.



I Want You Even More

Two hearts

Two souls

Two bodies to share

To explore and excite

Through the day and the night

I want you even more!


Luscious lips feel the touch

To unite and fulfill

Each tongue to hone in

On pleasures for sure

Your smooth body

I want you even more!


And taste on your tongue

We will seek new emotions

And deep pleasure they’ll bring

Love reveals all

When you’re connected as one

I want you even more!


The physical, the mental

Two hearts become one

Every moment reveals love

Each second knows more

How our hearts beat together

I want you even more!


And forever we’re one

Love conquers all

We know that for sure

When you’re completely in love

You feel at least ten feet tall!

I want you even more!


This union we have

Will remain forever more

Passionate moments

Mean more that’s for sure

We have always loved

I want you even more!


But this love means even more

As we whisper our happiness

Each breath reveals more

We were born to make love

And we will continue for sure

I want you even more!


Your succulent lips

Make me want you even more!

I am so glad that I have found you

And this love will ensure

Complete happiness, today and ever more!

I want you even more!

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susanzheng profile image

susanzheng 4 years ago

That's a very beautiful poem. I love it. You are doing a wonderful job.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Susanzheng - thank you so much.


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The Suburban Poet 4 years ago from Austin, Texas

There you are! Another beautifully sweet and loving poem and whoever inspired this is very lucky to have someone who will write a poem such at this.... I won't say I hope all is well because obviously all is well...


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

you really know your way around love poems.. I loved it Period!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

The Suburban Poet - thank you - yes I am very lucky to have the love of my life that SO inspires me!


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi acaetnna.

You've gone and done it again. Caught me off guard. I have just put the finishing touches to my latest hub which I will publish tomorrow morning ( your the first to know).

I'm just browsing through to see what emails have arrived and I see your lovely name.

A beautiful love poem as always.

UP Awesome, Beautiful.

LOL Ghaelach


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Frank Atanacio - awesome - thank you!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Ghaelach and of couse I will check out your latest hub as soon as it is published!!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

wow, only a woman can write with the passion that she feels, with such a soft touch that a man will envy such a touch in her words but feel the love within.

Great write.


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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

Beautful poetry, acaetnna, and the 'loving trees' photo is the perfect accompaniment. Thank you for this treat!


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

You have someone very special, may it last forever.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Wow! Cupid was busy! Enjoy


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

The poem evokes bodily pleasures.

Lovely


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stricktlydating 4 years ago from Australia

I love following your poetry, and this one is one of my favourites! So sensual and romantic.


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

Our Hubsville love goddess is back in full swing, so nice to read of the LOVE you both have for each other. Yes indeed Cupid is busy in both your young lives. You are indeed a sensual, loving lover, may he continue to reap your rewards and you his. Keep the loving coming, it brightens up our nights. Voted up and all HOT buttons pressed.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Cleaner3 thank you so much. What wonderful words, I know you understand love. Thank you again.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Drbj thank . I am so pleased you popped by and enjoyed this poem. Thank you for visiting.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Jackie. Thank you for popping by. Yes I do have someone very, very special and I'm not gonna let him go!!!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Mhatter99 - thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment - I appreciate it.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Vinaya Ghimire and thank you.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Stricktlydating - we are definitely on the same wave length, we love love and romance.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Vincent, my Shakespeare. You always make my heart melt with your wonderful words. Thank you so much for stopping by, I shall be over to see you shortly.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Another beautiful masterpiece written in love for two that are in love !

Vote up and more !!!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Kashmir - thank you, I have missed you.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Isn't it wonderful to love someone so completely. Your poetry is beautiful and i wish you only GREAT joy my friend...


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Your poems of love are beautiful - you have found something very special and I am so happy for you!

Thank you for sharing with us and voted up.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Your poems always make me want to fall in love again and again.

Loved this one too!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Always Exploring, I always so value your opinion. Your poetry is so completely amazing in my opinion. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Awesome and thank you again.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Movie Master thank you, thank you so much.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Love is such a wonderful emotion to experience - thank you so much Just Ask Susan.


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

Oh... Mama Mia - this is a passionate one. Written beautifully as usual.

You have an awesome way with words. Your words can turn a cloudy sky into a Sky with a beautiful Rainbow. :-)


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prasetio30 4 years ago from malang-indonesia

I want you even more. I don't want you just as friend. But I want you as a family here. Beautiful poem and you always "hot". Vote up and take care :-)

Prasetio


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

A poem with grace and charm and beauty.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Your poems always make me smile, you are so much in love with your speacial man and reading your poems reminds me of how special my man is. May you feel this way forever :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Lady_E - thank uou aa always. Your comments are always so truly amazing - thank you so very much.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Prasetio and wow and wow again. Thank you so much - I hope you are well.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Mckbirdbks - you are amazing - thank you.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Rosemary, I know that you and I feel the same. When you are in love you know it will last forever.


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Wow, Acaetnna, Kinda leaves one Breathless...Beautifully set to the rhythm called, Love!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Such a beautiful poem about love. You have great talent.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

acaetnna ~ I can but only say 'wow'. And I wonder, even if I love someone enough to want him even more, would I ever be able to be 'completely' in love? Fear of disappointment will always prevent me to be 'completely' in love. Maybe suspicions of all sorts is part of this fear. Maybe this completely in love thing is only possible for those who have never loved before and who have had the privilege to fall in love with the perfect soul mate.

But I know I should not spoil your beautiful poem with this kind of a comment. Your poems promote hope and trust in love and lovers, and encourage us to want (and trust) our lovers even more...

Bravo!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Your poems always inspire and stand out. They are always romantic love poems. And they are beautiful when written like this with feelings and passion. Poets with passion are as unstoppable as bullets. Long live love. :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. A really lovely and touching poem about true love. Reminded me of my husband and I as we're soulmates and we have a very loving relationship.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

B.Malin thank you as always.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Teaches 12345 - thank you.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Martie I always value your indepth comments. You made a very interesting point. As long as one is happy and listens to their true heart I think that it must be love for sure. I guess I just fancied the idea of being able to want my man even more (if you know what I mean!!!!) I think it was the physical side of love that I was referring to in this poem.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Cathy, thank you so much for stopping by. I always value your comments because not only are you a fine poet, but you just ooze love in abundance. Shall be over to check out more of your wonderful poetry as soon as I get a chance.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Gypsy Rose Lee thank you. We are the fortunate ones whom have found their soul mates. It is a wonderful feeling to be truly in love and to feel this amazing emotion.


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CMCastro 4 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

Another beautiful poem! Love is beautiful. :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you CMCastro, yes love can certainly be beautiful.


SamanthaMiller11 4 years ago

Aw this poem is sweet. It kind of reminds me of some of the things I say to my husband haha. It made me feel good when I read it. The only thing I would say, is the line "When you're in love, you feel at least ten feet tall!" seems a little awkward, it doesn't quite fit with the rest of the mood. It's still cute, but in a children's book way not a romantic way. If I were to make a suggestion, I would say something like "you feel solid and tall." but that's just my constructive criticism, I don't expect you to take it seriously haha. Wonderful poem all in all


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KenWu 4 years ago from Malaysia

That's beautiful.. I'm not a romantic person but I just love it very much.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Samantha for your constructive criticism. I love that - that you have taken the time and trouble to give your opinions. Brilliant - I love it and thank you so much! I tend to disagree with you because i still consider this to be an adult saying. I so appreciate yout thoughts though and constructive suggetions - thank you so much.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi KenWu, thank you. A pity you're not a romantic person, romance is so , so important as far as I am concerned. Thank you for being so completely honest anyway.


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Voted up beautiful. You painted a very good picture through the use of imagery.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Lovedoctor - thank you so much. I love your profile name by the way!!! Awesome!!


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thougtforce 4 years ago from Sweden

Wow, It is so wonderful to see another poem from you! No one can write about love the way you do and the words in this poem describe the real thing. Beautiful and voted up, up!

Tina


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Beautiful! I came back for a second read.


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vocalcoach 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

You are the love goddess of hubpages acaetnna. Once again you have created the supreme love poem with magnificent images to magnify the emotion. Voted up and beautiful...like you.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Tina, thank you. Your comments are always truly amazing -

thank you so much. I shall pop over to see your latest hubs as soon as I get a chance.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Vinaya Ghimire, thank you; that's amazing.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

VocalCoach , thank you. I always so appreciate your visit and of course your wonderful comments. Thank you.


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Sensual, intimate, seductive and full of sweet emotion. Your poetry zings with electricity and warms the reader. What a wonderful expression of love, acaetnna. Loved it. beautiful.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

How lovely to see you here Docmo. I hope you are well and having fun. Thank you for visiting and for your lovely comment. I so appreciate that.


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Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

I just love the way you bare your heart and soul with wild abandon...this is one more poem of delicious romantic lusciousness. Wonderful images to go along with the words, acaetnna. Thanks and voted up / beautiful.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Denise. Thank you so much for dropping by, I always value your comments - thank you. I have been a little distacted recently and now I must check out your latest hubs!


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Acaetnna, I agree with Denise. You have a beautiful heart and soul as it is read in every word of your poetry. You are a rare gem and your partner is very lucky:) To have that passion and love for someone, it just is a beautiful thing. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so very much Lyricwriter, I always really value your opinion. I am very fortunate I know to have a love like this.


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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia

such simple words you use to express a deep abiding love that you are so blessed with. Again another wonderful love poem that makes me yearn to fall in love all over again :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Nighthag- thank you . You always know what to say to capture a girl's heart! Thank you.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

I just love your poetry. Love the deep feelings.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow KoffeeKlatch Gals ; thank you SO much - as always!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Wow acaetnna what do I say except Up up and away!!!

you are so talented and I love to see your smiling face.

Great words and here's to so many more to come.

Eddy.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you too Eiddwen. As you have probably noticed I have been a little pre-occupied away from HubPages recently! I am having the time of my life and loving being alive. Hope you are enjoying your life and are completely happy!


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Great touching hub, voted up.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Girishpuri !


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

just revisiting this poem boy you're really good :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Frank, you really are very kind. Thank you x


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi my friend just thought i would read this awesome poem again. So nice to see you here on HP have not seen you for a bit.

Have a great rest of the week and a awesome weekend !


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

A wonderful and heartfelt poem, ah love something I sort of remember! lol! voted up! cheers nell


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Kashmir my friend. I have definitely been out of the loop for a while but now I am back on course!!!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Nell Rose thank you so much. Love is a wonderful emotion and one that everyone should experience! I do - how lucky am I?!!!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Hi Acaetnna,

I came back for a second read. This poem of yours cheered me very much.

Cheers


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dallaswriter 4 years ago from North Carolina

Writing with passion is not always something that comes easy... We tend to write what we know and seldom can we write about what we want as my thoughts are with poetry, "it must seep from within the soul, from within the hard wiring" you just can't make that stuff up! Continue to be passionate about your love, keep the affair of your marriage vital and never stop loving or communicating. Love reading your story....


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

How truly beautiful my friend and here's to so many more to follow on here.

Enjoy your weekend,

Eddy.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Beautiful and tender write about loving! You do this so very well!


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Love to the max. Beautiful poem, acaetnna


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you so much Vinaya Ghimire and I am so pleased that my poem cheered you so much!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Dallaswriter. It is definitely easier to write about something that one experiences and something that is deep in one's soul.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Eiddwen, wonderful to have you visit again and thank you for your comment.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Audrey, I so appreciate your comment - thank you.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Coffeegginmyrice!


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

Well, now, where's my oxygen! lol Hot stuff and sorry I got no notice and in fact it shows I am not even following you so I will fix that.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Jackie, great to see you again. I haven't had much opportunity to be on HubPages recently and I have a lot to catch up with; including checking out your hubs! Thanks for your great comment and thank you for following me!


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

You really have a way with your romantic, sensual and beautiful poetry. The words convey so much emotion and tend to linger in the mind long after finishing to read them. Bravo!


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leni sands 4 years ago from UK

I love reading your poetry - it is so inspiring.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Docmo - wow what can I say but THANK YOU so much! You are amazing and I love it when you visit my hubs. So thank you SO much!!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Leni - thank you as always. I trust you are well and enjoying every moment.


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epigramman 4 years ago

....well Miss S - funny you say that because I want you even more too - your poetry that is and I've been wanting you ever since we first met - and you made a man out of me - and I started writing love poetry - mainly because of you and your incredible love poetry - yes you are my muse. What else is left to say! lol lake erie time ontario canada and sending warm wishes and good energy at 9:07pm and hoping sincerely that you and the love of your life had a nice summer


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Joy56 4 years ago

happy to know you are happy, and you have the gift of expressing those feeings and emotions so well. May this romance last forever.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Epi. You always know how to romance a woman and your comment here is no exception. Thank you so much for your visit. I am so pleased that I have played some small part in bringing the love and romance side out of you and you have expressed it with your incredible love poetry. You are a man of so many talents and you have a tremendous feeling and a way with words. Not only that ... you also have a heart of gold. I shall be over to check more of your many hubs ... shortly. Thank you for ... simply being YOU!

My Summer was more than great ...thank you ... shame about the weather here in England though!!! Hope you are enjoying every moment.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so very much Joy56. I appreciate your visit and commment. Thank you again.


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Happyboomernurse 4 years ago from South Carolina

Wow, it's a good thing it's a crisp fall morning cause if it was still summer I'd have a hard time cooling down after reading this sensual, sizzling, beautiful poem about desire, erotic pleasure and love.

Voted up across the board except for funny.

Hub Hugs,

Gail


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you so much Happyboomernurse - your comment was amazing. I have been so pre-occupied lately (in the most amazing positive way!) that I have not been as prolific on here as I might! Hope you are well and enjoying life. It is so wonderful when shared with the perfect person!!!


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Twilight Lawns 4 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

I just received your message, and, my friend, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. You are so kind, so generous, so lovely.

I always look forward to your promise, romantic soul, sweet nature. And when I fed cynical and a little bitter, I know your words will lift my heart. And when I write a tender verse or two, I always hope you'll stumble upon it and you'll like it.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Twilight Lawns so much for your lovely message. My life has been rather hectic of late and HubPages reluctantly has taken somewhat of a back seat, but I shall definitely be over to check out your hubs again as soon as I have a chance.

Take care now.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Not that you are a romantic or anything!!! Beautiful write!


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

I Want You -to write- Even More


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you very much Audrey ... have a great weekend.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Mckbirdbks ... I will try!!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

that was a beautiful write.. I agree with mckbirddks I want you to write more.. You are most talented..

sharing

Debbie


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Debbie, your comment was so lovely, really sweet of you. Thank you. Have a great Halloween!


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ROBERTHEWETTSR 4 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

A beautiful love poem so full of passionate imagery and emotion. I will be back to read more of your wonderful poems.


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Your words are a loving embrace, so beautiful.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Robert - thank you so very much!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Marcoujor - thank you so much!


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Very beautiful.It flows smoothly exploring the depth.I voted up.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you very much James-wolve.


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

So much love shown here! Wow!! You ve here such a passionate poem no wonder many are coming for more that one read. Am loving this poem infact, I want more...


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Ubanichijioke ... I have been away and have missed you!

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