I Want to be Your Water Bottle by Manatita

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A Light-hearted poem to encourage laughter.


“I wish to be your water bottle, dancing on the hop,

Hold me, squeeze me; drink from me,

Go on! Remove my top!

Let my nourishing fluids, permeate your cells,

Show me your zeal, my Sweet, arouse my inner bells.

It’s a jungle where I sleep!

I’m thrown from trains

And rise near cinders, on a garbage heap.

Recycled, which is good,

But now I’m in a mellow mood!

I want to be your water bottle, dancing on the hop,

Hold me, squeeze me; drink from me,

Go on! Remove my top! “


“You wish to be my water bottle?

Then warm and cuddly be!

My lips to quench; my forlorn heart,

A soothing welcome start!

My bosom tease on cold dark nights,

When comfort is the key.

And now beneath my pillow,

Or down where none can see,

Encircled round my thighs, dear boy,

Exclusively for me.

So yes, do be my water bottle, quickly on the hop.

Let me hold you, squeeze you on my lap,

Spill not a single drop.”

- Manatita, (Bard of Solace) 23rd September, 2014. Copyr

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annart 2 years ago from SW England

Great fun! Naughty but nice. Thanks for the extra smile today. There have been quite a few hubs on the subject of laughter lately which is great to see. Laughter cures many ills and lights up our lives.

Ann


manatita44 2 years ago

So true, Ann. Laughter, a great medicine. Hope it's not too naughty. I can do so many things with my pen but my niche is always to inspire, to serve; to elevate ... I do not wish to drift too far! Fond and loving thoughts to you, my Dear. Thanks a lot!


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

I am happy to see you take a light hearted break, sometimes it is needed to keep the wheels turning! This was a fun read and well worth a share. Your friend. Jamie


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annart 2 years ago from SW England

No, it's not too naughty; just makes us smile!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

This was fun to read manatita. I believe you could write a poem about anything and it would be interesting. More please.


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

The title is a puller. Great job providing entertainment and smiles.


manatita44 2 years ago

Thanks Ann.

Appreciate the encouragement.

Jamie, loving and sweet sentiment, Appreciated.

Ruby, yes, I can. I belong to a particular group circle, sort off, and I would not want to be too contrary. But yes, not much I cannot write on. My niche is the esoteric and the ethereal, normally. My spirit wants to serve and inspire. I guess humour helps.

Hi Dee, you're one of the two people who should tell me stop writing this kind of poetry. It might please me, you never know.

Yes, I see what you mean about the title. Plus cute words follow, I suppose. Deep appreciations.


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

And encourage laughter you did. I'll be smiling all day long because of this. Nice one my friend.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Very funny poem from you Manatita. We all need a good laugh and this served that purpose.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Hi Bill, Hope it helped your busy day. Thanks Bro.

Jodah, good that you liked this poem and found it funny. I was trying to do a light-hearted one. Much gratitude.


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MizBejabbers 2 years ago

I don't know whether to smile, snicker, or take it seriously. Well, just as long as you don't write about honey pots.


manatita44 2 years ago

If you tell me what they are, yes, Miz. What are they?

Thanks for your kind comments. have a great evening.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

This was a really nice change. Voted up awesome!


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midget38 2 years ago from Singapore

Cute and romantic, Manatita. A real change of pace for you!


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thanks Victor.

Change indeed! Much Mehta (loving kindness)

Michelle, yes. A real change of pace or niche, I suppose. Still awaiting to hear from you on my loving request. Any news?


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

There are many types of water bottles from which to choose. We celebrate everything else, so what not that?


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Indeed Deb! why not? Have a great weekend.


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Great poems, enjoyed reading.


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York

Another side to the great Manatita! Such fun to read and many thoughts to think. So glad I read this early today.

Voted up, funny, awesome, and interesting.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

My friend, manatita, this is so much entertaining and how beautifully you weaved it all ! Really a remarkable feat and so wonderful to savor it all. I loved reading it and enjoyed with all my heart. Thank you. Voted up in all respects and shared.


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The Examiner-1 2 years ago

That was really different manatita44! It was good too. I use the metal ones to keep water in for drinking everyday at home. Your poem was amusing as I read it, and it was interesting too. :-) I voted up, shared and pinned it.

Kevin


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thanks Kevin.

You may know that my niche is the ethereal; the spiritual. But people are at different stages of development and occasionally it's useful to digress or create some kind of diversity. Glad you liked it.

Off to Scotland a.m hope I remember to have a look at your Hubs when I return. Gratitude.

My brother Hariprasad, How are you? Missed you. By the way, I should not asked things like that, but did I dedicate a poem to you? I get confused, sometimes. Too much to do. Off to Scotland tomorrow but will check when I return. You deserve so much more, my dear brother. Peace.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Tillsontitan,

So good to see that you like my poem. I keep thinking that someone would say stay with your ethereal stuff, but no one does. I'm happy that so many people get joy here, in which case it will still have served its purpose.

Gratitude Mary. God's peace, as always to you and yours.

Thank You, Vellur. More gratitude to you.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Of course, dear brother, there is a very sweet poem " All This And That Is Simply Love " that you have dedicated to me. I had gone through that lovely creation and felt so humbled by such a kind gesture. You are such a gentle soul. Thank you. All peace.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Yes, I remember now. Off in 20 mins or so. Much peace.


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SAQIB6608 2 years ago from HYDERABAD PAKISTAN

Loved every bit of it till not spilling any single droplet.

Regards & Salamz

SAQIB


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thanks a lot, Bro.

One with a difference. Just back from a foreign trip. See you soon.

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