I dreamt of you my brother .......verse

Last night I dreamt this ......
I walked out of my door
traffic moving beside you
the busy street and there you were
my dead brother

Suitcase by your leg
I asked where are you going Jerry?
I was shocked that you were leaving
[ death ]?

Much the same as when you were alive
you said
"I've just gotta go "..... we often see each other
in such short visits

But then I awoke in a mood
of familiar loss
devastation
death

And then you were gone
I miss your lovely soul
you were a perfectly
humble man of god
I guess God needs you more




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Nikkij504gurl 2 years ago from Louisiana

I lost a brother too. One I never met. And I hope to meet him one day in Heaven.


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Nikki , I promise you , you will ! It's just that I am impatient ! , I hope life is good for you !...ed


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is beautiful. I've lost three brothers, just wishing we had more time together..


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Hey sweety ! Yes ....more time !


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

And then you were gone

I miss your lovely soul

you were a perfectly

humble man of god

I guess God needs you more

Oh how beautifully sad Ed; voted up, across and shared. Here's wishing you a great weekend my friend.

Eddy.


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Hi Eddy my sweet !Thank you for always being so kind !


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Sad, beautiful tribute and a theme that so many can relate to. Voted it up.


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Hi Blossom , that dream was so real and I had it just as I awoke in the morning , kind of sets the mood for the day you know . Thanks for the nice comment.......Ed

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