I see you see me

A story of envy....

I see you with smiles and glee

Watching you wishing me

Knowing its inside here

Beneath this pile of pain and fear
Trapped to see inside of me

I see you seeing me


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Watching you wishing me

I be you you be me

Now that I am you and you are me

Its plain to see what is true

Watching me wishing you

If I were you I'd wish for me

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myownworld 6 years ago from uk

great ode to 'envy'! Really liked this! Now add pics...(just google 'pictures of envy' and then choose the image and download to your computer; then edit hub, add photo capsule, move it up through arrows at the appropriate place and vola!)

Anyway, keep writing...you're doing great so far! :)


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lovelypaper 6 years ago from Virginia

Liked this. Hope to read more of your prose and poetry. Best wishes.


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whiteorchids 6 years ago from Tropical Paradise

Your Prose' is great, looking forward to reading more hubs.


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MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago Author

Thank you very much. I also am looking forward to reading more of your work


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PegCole17 6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Loved it Mordechai. Speaks to me of greener grass. Keep on writing. You've got a great start.


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MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago Author

Thanks Peg I appreciate the encouragement!


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donna bamford 6 years ago from Canada

Not bad. Not bad at all!


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MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago Author

:) Thanks!


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BradyBones 5 years ago from Somewhere Between a Dream and Memory

Awesome, Mordechai! Looking forward to reading more!


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MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago Author

Thank you very much Brady, I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

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