I want someone to love me

I am alone in the world.

I am lost without you by my side.

You are my prince charming.

Somewhere in this world is where you hide.

I long for that day I find you.

I long for the touch of your hand.

I want to know the feeling.

The feeling of being in love.

To love someone forever.

To have someone love me.

I wish that I could be perfect maybe then you could see.

No one in this world will love me.

No one in this world will care.

I will be alone forever.

Look in hell you will find me there.

What a silly game I have played.

I really thought you felt the same.

What a heartless thing from you.

To make me fall in love with you.

I can never have you.

I can never touch you.

I can never make you love me!

But I want to feel the pain.

The pain of this game!

The only thing to do.

Is sit and wait for you!

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loua 6 years ago from Elsewhere, visiting Earth ~ the segregated community planet

Its a series of deep waves of negative emotion, it worked for Poe; but at a cost, it fed his depression...

If one climbs a mountain and looks down upon the canyon of depression you constructed one sees the power that is lost to trenching out this gigantic rift in the heart of ones soul...

You have made me hurt for you in this piece, it elicited strong emotion, which is good;but you should repair the ache...

You either have a typo or a freudian slip in ~ You are my price charming.

Paint me a picture using your emotion that lifts up what is brought down, so to maintain your power of your emotion...

Keep on writing, its cathartic; keep on smiling the world will smile with you...

;) Dark is good; but mix it up...


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Mr Nice 6 years ago from North America

Hi chrissie123,

~ Some people come into our lives, leave footprints on our hearts, and we are never the same. ~

~ Don't find love, let love find you. That's why it's called falling in love because you don't force yourself to fall you just fall. ~


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Internetwriter62 6 years ago from Marco Island, Florida

Sounds like someone broke your heart really bad. I know that unrequited love hurts, but there's an old and wise saying that says "it's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all" With that said. It's a very deep and emotional hub. Excellent poetry.


gjf 6 years ago

If its not the guy in this video...fagetaboudit eh?


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Dee Dee MonSherie 6 years ago from Hollywood, California

Sweet Chere', please let your heart work out the pain same as when one works his/her muscles to gain strength and endurance, let your love for this hopeless one be like a workout of the muscle of your heart, then when you become strong enough and resilient enough to endure true love...your heart will be able to hold the love of the TRUE ONE...your own true Soul Mate...the poetry is good, but the pain must be temporary...you need to move forward...everything you will become one day is in front of you, so get yourself in shape love, make your heart strong!


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is very moving. Loss in not permanent. It doesn't last - we move on from it. We are pained by the memory of how wonderful and great it is / was. And its affects us in many ways. But we learn from the experience, chrissie. And we risk it all again for when it happens again. Don't doubt or second-guess yourself. You have too much going for you to do that. I have a friend living very far from here, and she has found love for the very first time ever. She dared not believe, but she was open to the possibilities, and one day it just happened. There the guy was, walked right up to her - and they connected.

You will find the person out there.


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Teresa Laurente 6 years ago from San Antonio, Texas, U.S.A.

Chrissie123, what beautiful thought you share in here. I like Wayne Dwyer, his writings. One of it is this; If you look for love, you acknowledge your lack. Love is in you and follows you wherever you go. So, when you love the you that you are through acceptance and proud of all that you do; a magnet attracts the same soul that's also abundant of what they have in you. Well, I guess, that is true for me. More power to you dear. Keep on. Thanks for sharing such lovely thought.


TattoGuy 6 years ago

Ive missed catching up on my fav writers and well you know I love Chrissie and that was just a great poem, I love reading yer poems x


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James A Watkins 6 years ago from Chicago

I've been deeply in love nine times in my life. Each time the relationship ended I just wanted to die. But I didn't die, and I learned to love again. The sixth one was the most intense, so I think you have a ways to go. Thanks for the fine poetry.

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