I wish I Could Write the Sea .......

Well ..... its true I wish I could
write to the sea
Perhaps it would be in the messege in a
bottle only the ocean could see

Not of love lost or of that of the never
once realized
I don't know .....maybe if love were possible
the sea might realize

That it is she that I love .....the turning tides
my mistress of blue and grey
I do love the turning seas
what more can I say

Have you ever made love in the sea
slowly swaying in rhythm
Well for me its just the sea and I
some other worldly prism

Ahh but just one more love slipped away
she 's set me free again
Oh yes ....I've heard it all before ...
we can always be friends





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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

I love the sea and your poem.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Susan , Thank you my new found friend , I would watch over you at the sea as you walked in solitude ....just to be near the sea! LOL....:-}


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Yes I've made love in the sea, a long time ago...


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Field-Of-Flowers 5 years ago from Midwest, USA

A great poem! I too love being at the sea there's nothing like it! Thanks for sharing! :-)


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Fennelseed 5 years ago from Australia

What is it about the sea? Its like a magnet, its lure is so hard to resist. I love your 4th stanza and the sensuous rhythmic swaying sensation it evokes.

A beautiful poem once again.


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Thelma Alberts 5 years ago from Germany

I love the sea and the ocean. It has magic in itself. Is it not the Cliffs of Moher, Ireland in your photo? The view is awesome sitting near the edge of this cliff. A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , You are a lucky girl, LOL , but why only long ago ? hehe .....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Fennelseed , I could sit and watch the sea until the end of time , at least the end of my time...:-} Thank you for sharing .


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thelma Alberts , Oh no, you have been to Ireland and I haven't! :~} Yes the cliffs of Moher are where we need to be for the love of the sea! Thank you for coming by!....[:~}


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Thelma Alberts 5 years ago from Germany

Hahaha;-) Yes, I was there and it was amazing and awesome. You "must" go there and see the beauty of it. Thank you for your follow.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Another gem as usual.

You have such a natural style to your writing and this is why so many others enjoy your hubs.

Thanks for sharing.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful. I love to watch the tide come in, and i love to walk on the beach. Thank you again.

Cheers


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thelma Alberts , Thank you for sharing , come on write to us of Ireland! ....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Eiddwen ,You are way too kind , writing wouldn't be as fun or rewarding without you!!! Thank you so much!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always Exploring , I'm glad you are sharing ! And the tides are so peaceful....:-} Thank you for reading.


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

This makes me think of a rocky coast sea, full of passion and turbulent love. And then the lady just lets one go and moves on to break another heart. Just great writing horseback.


marellen 5 years ago

Your work is always so spiritual, at least it is to me.

And yes, I made love in the sea....


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hyphenbird , The sea :

It caresses our yearnings

It fires the furnace of desires

It bores straight through our soul

to leave us hollow

and forlorn

It massages our hearts

Just enough to bring

us back again

And then

and then....

another wave rolls in....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Marellen, Maybe one day you'll tell us about that....LOL....:-}


Marina Lester 5 years ago

This one was interesting my friend, and one for the sea lovers of the world! ;)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Marina , Ahh the sea , We do share that love , No? More later....:-]

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