ICE CUBES IN THE TEA

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By: Wayne Brown



Is it just a flagrant rumor or is it really, really so?


There is one way to find out; just go ahead and go


I don’t want to risk the chance to set curiosity free


But they say that in Hell there’s no ice cubes in the tea



They say that old Devil has pointy horns on his head


That he carries a pitch-fork and his skin is tainted red


They say he is an ugly one, quite an evil sight to see


Maybe that is why there’s no ice cubes in the tea



They say the fires are all around; flames leaping high


And the Devil will poke his fork as you go walking by


They say the fires burn higher than a lone Pine tree


With all that fire, no wonder there’s no ice in the tea



They say it is really hot; but it can’t be hotter than Hell


They say the Devil’s fork is sharp; feel it and you’ll yell


Rumor says that sweat rolls off like waves from the sea


That could be the reason there’s no ice cubes in the tea



If you show up down there, the door only swings one way


If you should enter there, I am pretty sure that you’ll stay


And when the devil stands before you in his regal devilry


Look around and see if there’s any ice cubes in his tea



They say the tea is very warm; served hot in a glass


Everyone sinner must drink, one cannot take a pass


And all the ice is kept under heavy chains and locks


Best to not ask the Devil for a scotch on the rocks



Just drink up your old hot tea; learn to play the games


Be very careful where you step, lest you burn in flames


Maybe then if you can survive and manage to work free


Once back into this world, there’ll be ice cubes in your tea



The righteous believe, most assuredly, there’s a better plan


To win in this eternal struggle battling for the soul of man


Kneel in prayer before the Pearly Gates for St. Peter to see


And then tell him that you’d like some ice cubes in your tea



©Copyright WBrown2012. All Rights Reserved.


1 October 2012


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Extremely visual. I think I'll stick with the ice cubes and leave the hot tea to those who prefer it. Strong message done well, my friend!


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

What a creative piece of work Wayne. The video is also the perfect compliment. Well done. Voted up and awesome.


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Whew! That's one hot poem, Wayne! :) May I have some ice for my sweet tea? :)


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@rcrumple...Thank you. This one just rushed forth this morning...love it when that happens! ~WB

@lrc7815....Thank you. I was really glad I could find a video to match up so well....really helps the effect. ~WB

@TToombs08...Just ask ol' Saint Peter to pass the pitcher....a lemon slice, prehaps? Thanks much! ~WB


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Pamela99 4 years ago from United States

How unique! This is an awesome poem with such character and I will probably notice my ice cubes from now on. :-) The music is perfect as well. This is a strong message and it is so easy to get down on your knees and look up to your creator.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Pamela99...I can only surmise that it was a gift of God to me....it came so quickly to me this morning that I barely had time to get the word processor fired up to capture it. So glad you like it! ~WB


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breakfastpop 4 years ago

I will never take my ice cubes for granted again. Up and oh so awesome.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@breakfastpop...Ha,ha! What a great way to think about it! Thanks, Poppy! ~WB


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The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX

I like crunching the ice at the end.

TFP


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@TFP...Better err on the good side, Frog. I think St. Pete has your ice...crunch, crunch! LOL! Thanks much! ~WB


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Oh yes it is the ice that cools down a hot cup of tea. Great poem, enjoyed reading.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

What a creative idea and you express it so well. It was an enjoyable read - light-hearted in some ways, but with a depth of meaning as well.


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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

They say you must give the devil his due,

But with this poem, Wayne, the devil is YOU!

The words are lyrical, the theme is hot,

And hey, I'm kidding, the devil you're NOT!


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@drbj....Hey, you write a great verse, Doc. Come on and join me in poetry alley. We'll make tons of money! LOL! Thanks much! ~WB


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My Minds Eye53 4 years ago from Tennessee

Great poem Wayne. I found this on Twitter, for some reason I am not getting all my notices from HP. I will have to stop by your place when I have more time and see what I have missed. Loved this voted up and shared my friend!


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@My Minds Eye53....I much prefer the old notification system. All I see is some kind of weekly bundle of activity. I find more just stumbling around. I just happened to post the links on Twitter for these two....poor response there as everyone only wants to read 140 characters. LOL! Thanks for the good words, glad you liked it! ~WB


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This was an interesting and creative poem. I liked it. For some reason got the urge for iced tea. Well done and passing this on.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Gypsy Rose Lee....I am sure the emphasis is on "ice" huh? Thanks much, so glad you liked it. ~WB


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Linda Cassini 4 years ago from Las Vegas NV

Great focus...I was sweating the ending :)..Good work :)


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Linda Cassini....LOL! Thanks much, sorry to make you sweat through that but it is the little things that sometimes count in our eternal comfort...just thought I'd point it out. ~WB


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Linda Cassini 4 years ago from Las Vegas NV

TMI...lol..JK


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Wayne, this poem of yours reminds me of Dante's 'Inferno'. I am a big-big fan of Vanessa May. Voted up and very thought-provoking.

Oh, and teeth will be provided in order for everybody to gnash teeth...


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@MartieCoetser...Well, thank you! That puts me in pretty good company as a poet. Glad you it enjoyed all of it! ~WB


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

Very entertaining, lol. Loved the video too. Congrats on the 100, if I ever had one I haven't seen it. Another lol. ^


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Jackie Lynnley...Thanks so very much for the good words, Jackie. I really like this one...it came to me so easily...just flowed. As for the "100"...it is a special one of sorts as it is the 100th "100" that I have received since I have been here. Ironically, my 100,000th view is within a couple more days. Still, for all those "100's", I do believe that I took my greatest pride in that first one. There is a certain reassurance there that I never take for granted. You write some great stuff but you will have to go outside and play the game a bit more .....hub-hop, answer and ask questions, give lot of comments....it all comes with that. At the same time, there is a given level of just sheer luck. I wrote a hub entitled, "Squatter's Rights"....never even close to what I consider my best work. That hub, because of the subject matter, has gone relatively viral as compared to my other hubs....well over 4,000 views in less than a year and the score stays high as it remains consistently in my top two all the top for views and score. I am always looking for another plateau to keep me focused but I never lose sight of wanting to put out quality work. I am just proud to be here! ~WB


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Jackie Lynnley....BTW no matter what I write, you'll never see me in the "Hub Nuggets" nor find one of mine in the "Hub of the Week". That is a reality I also understand! ~WB


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

The devil made you write this one did he Wayne? or was it the scotch on the rocks not the tea? lol I loved the twist and the video fit so well together. It would be a sad day in Hell for sure to find ice in my tea. I'm sure I will get use to hot tea. BTW congratulations on your books on Smashwords, good luck with them.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Vincent Moore...Thanks for the good wishes on the books. As you know from experience, putting them out there is the easy part...getting them sold is another matter. Still, there is the satisfaction of working at that level. Smashwords is a challenging format to just work through in order to publish the book. I almost gave up at times receiving rejection after rejection on the manuscripts by their formatting department. I had a lot of fun writing this poem...the words just flowed so rapidly to me...maybe the ol' devil was involved! LOL! Thanks much, Ken! ~WB


Dust 4 years ago

Wayne, great hub, you tied it up with that video so well, I laughed some to that got you the all up but beautiful, and maybe that too, I forgot while reading the comments and to scroll back would be just too hard LOL,

Peace and Blessings,dust


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas Author

@Dust....Thanks so very much, Dusty. Hope you are enjoying your journey out there and reliving some memories. Keep us posted. ~WB

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