INNOCENT HEART, hoping for LOVE

Dark again but no rain,

Lightning allover, this night again,

Wondering I and flow in vein,

To mirror out the image again.

Nature holds in, a longing strain,

Sometimes it dries and sometimes it drains,

Extremes are always in pain,

Do it be dries or do it be drains

In silence haft past night,

Feeling sleepy, but want to write,

Working nature, inspiring side,

Viewed with an inner eyed,

In silence haft past night,

Feeling sleepy, but want to write,

Working nature, inspiring side,

Viewed with an inner eyed,


Waiting or checking me, making no noise,

Or longing for my making a choice,

Should it rain, or should it not,

Don’t wish, its science, reason I thought.


Continuing the silence for hours,


Made me driven, to change my verse,


But if I wish, I may interfrit,

And if all makes one, then how world exist,


I fear, if I change, what is fixed,


I fear, with my wish, if nature restricted,


Its morning and still, silence can rate,

No sun yet on door, should I wait,


Days moved and so the clouds,

Night sky, no star found,

A few tiny drops did made sound,

But for a minute or two when they ground,


If I loose hope, it starts rain,

If I stop hoping, it dries again,

If I don’t long, and go wrong,

I afraid for, again a hotty song,


Why me, I am like all,

If I don’t hope why you scrawl,

I feel now its love and nothing stands odd

My innocent heart now, a new home to God.



He walks with me, hiding behind nature,

He talks to me, through every sculpture,

I know now, a religion that structure,

In me and in God, the same Love culture.


Now, my foot step

Wherever I kept,


Becomes a floor,

To a dancing step.



Now, my pen motive

Wherever I live,


Becomes only God,

People please forgive…

Comments 28 comments

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wytegarillaz 5 years ago from Australia

I enjoyed your hub , I found you while hub hopping !


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks....wytegarilllaz


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A.A. Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

An awesome cascade ending in a sincere request. Beautiful...


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Brandonwm80 5 years ago from Columbus Ohio

beutifull


Sueswan 5 years ago

Beautiful.

"In silence haft past night,

Feeling sleepy, but want to write,"

I can relate to this.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

A.A. Zavala thanks again...u have made too a sincere comment and effort to take time reading this poem.MADE a place not here in my comments but also in me forcing to end every hub is a beautiful and cascading way....thanks..and keep smiling

Brandonwm80...thanks a lot..i had waited for ur comments to come, and delighted to have one now, and happy u felt beauty in my poem.

Sueswan...ever intoxicated and sinked, we both are alike...thanks..u picked the most important lines...this was the moment i could sleep, but i decided to write and a gem i got.

Reading you poems and other write ups i can assess u now easily, I am suer you and youe environment are always in ocean of deep love weather they are human of animals. And if machine also like computer..then no wonder...emotions feeling with LOVE can vibrate any thing

keep inspiring me...thanks again


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Feeling of love is divided between mind and heart. Heart thinks of emotions and mind of rationality. Anyways, your poem is wonderful work of art.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks vinaya again, you are right mind changes and does behave rationally, heart binds in emotions and behave in a known and permanent manner.


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nancynurse 5 years ago from Southeast USA

Enjoyed your writing


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

my pleasure nancy......as ..u enjoyed ..here

my asset got fancy......as..u joined... here


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epigramman 5 years ago

....you take a cerebral approach to your writing of passion and profound truth and it is much appreciated by the epi-man because you write with poetic beauty and that is your art - the ability to make words complete and whole and yet also tell a story in the process - not too many writers can pull off that delicate balance - but you just did ...and so very well my friend!

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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

SO sweet of u ...epiman...thanks for such a nice complement..and seeing in depth of my writing. People like are also very few

who can en light the innocent heart

to get on their route

who can break all painful art,

to save a standing idea and generate a new

thats you...


"Quill Again" 5 years ago

Lovely and touching... a reflection to ponder this day... THank you as always.

Blessings


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks quill....


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi moneycop, I love the layout out, display and photos in your hub, excellent!

Lovely poem, thank you for sharing.


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dallas93444 5 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

Your words construct... Flag up!


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Your work is Beautiful and Flows along so well with the Photos that you choose, it all make for an Excellent presentation.


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

That was good, thanks for sharing


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks again Dallas...construction is three way...knowledge, love and then words..so it seems beautiful


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

abradford..thanks..commenting ..taking your precious time.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

b.MILAN...thanks for complement. i just not write to just write...i try that people should understand and love to read..and this motivates me to write as such..if ur beautiful comments will not come, it will be very hard for my hub to survive....so its yours gift of power to me..thanks.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks...movie....


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

You make your works awesome and beneficial. I love reading them. Bless you


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

just trying uban...


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ahorseback 4 years ago

Moneycop , Your writing inspires a lot of thought , and there is yearning in there too I think ! Poetry is a gift that gives back to you as well as to us , Thank you for sharing with us , By the way you are a beautiful woman ......we like that too...lol....:-}


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

and your comment makes me more correct and confident to do much more beautyfull work..i will try to creat such thouhts again n again in artistic manner...thanks a lot for giving ur precious time in readging and gaining here in.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Very nice, poetry moneycop.Where is JABALPUR? is it in India?

You are a beautiful young woman!!!!!!


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

yeah iits in India

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