I Dreamt Of Her Again (limerick)

My wife came to me in a dream

In wonder and beauty she’d gleam

As arms gently cup

Soon kisses I‘d sup

It’s time to wake up fool she’d scream


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Eazy_E 2 years ago from State College, Pennsylvania

HAHAHAHA! I'm not sure if this was supposed to be funny, as I am not sure of your background. But, for me, this is exactly the types of dreams I have about my own fiance'. Usually happens just as she yells at me in real life for over sleeping.

If that is similar for you, I love how it is set up to be so serious but then shifts into that punchline. If this is a poem of loss, my condolences are with you, and you have made a heart wrenching short collection of lines.

Thank you!


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

LOL..

i'm sure it's supposed to be funny - and it is!


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Martin........Damn! Don't you hate it when that happens??!


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AliciaC 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This limerick is funny and entertaining, but it's also a little sad, too. Poor man!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Always a rude awakening.


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Nadine May 2 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Goodmorning!


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A real wake-up call.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Hilarious way to wake up!

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