I Heard It Too (poem)

I heard you singing of another day

It stroked my heart the magic of that tune

That special hour not very far away

Like all the rest it drifted far too soon

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I closed my eyes to join you in that while

I held you close and danced into that mist

Until I found the moments of that smile

And all the precious memories we kissed

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Then all at once a felt the teardrops flow

And yet there was no answer to the pain

Just darkness from place so long ago

Perhaps it was the spark of this refrain

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Sing on my love for now we know it’s true

The feeling that you felt I it felt too

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Exquisite poetry Mh, just beautiful. Your imagery is always stunning as well. You are a truly gifted, as I have said many times before. Voted Up In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Beautiful poem, love the flow. the song you chose was perfect too.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Mhatter, I love it! That's a beautiful choice of picture up there too and the video plays a harmonious role to your lovely poem as well.


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Nice !!! Great complimentary graphics and music too.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

A lovely poem of memories of love passed. beautiful, Hatter.


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SommerDalton 4 years ago

Voted up and awesome


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MarleneB 4 years ago from Northern California, USA

Beautiful! You write in a way that creates virtual visual effects. I truly enjoy your work.


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Mama Kim 8 4 years ago

Absolutely beautiful M! I LOVE IT! Sharing


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Beautiful and very sweet!


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Wow! Love, love, love ! Great job!


Janhorner 4 years ago

Your love never falters; continues to flow; and brings such joy to your readers.

Voted up,

Jan


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Another beautiful sentiment fills the page once again...


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

It amazes me how you can write a few phrases and express a thought or feeling so well. Certain refrains from songs in the past can bring back all kinds of memories, but the way you describe it is exquisite.

Well done and voted up.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Then all at once a felt the teardrops flow

And yet there was no answer to the pain

Just darkness from place so long ago

Perhaps it was the spark of this refrain

-

Sing on my love for now we know it’s true

The feeling that you felt I it felt too

Brilliant words my friend which I vote across/up and share all around .

Eddy.


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

Simply beautiful! Recogning love..."I closed my eyes to join you in that while" ... I have to vote this up and beautiful ... write on mhatter!


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ZipperConstantine 3 years ago from United States

Very passionate and adding Adele brought your poem to life. Thank you.


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Laurinzo Scott 3 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

Mhatter... I think you may know how I feel about poetry,

this one is very beautiful, as I am a romantic fool... this is one I wish i'd written... really wonderful my friend!!!!!

The song too was a nice touch!!!!

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