I Heard Them Calling (tanka)

I heard them calling

Amid kisses of a dream

Of a star-swept night

Lost forevers in your arms

Memories waiting to be


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Awesome and beautiful.

Voted up ++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Moms-Secret 3 years ago from Central Florida

Very sweet. I can't hear them, not tonight anyway.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...you heard them calling...I saw them....loved it...


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Martin, astonishingly vivid images straight from the heart.

This tanka is so alive, it has its own vital signs!!

Great work-------

Thanks,

DJ.


Joanne M Olivieri 3 years ago

Memories waiting to be - I LOVE that. Well done. Voted up


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That sure says it all, Marin, just like a love letter.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is another one I had to read twice to get where you're going. It's about beginning. I like it!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Very pretty.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

This, Martin, is exquisite. Those are the best...the ones we have not yet experienced.

Voted up++++

Sending Angels to you this evening :) ps


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just lovely.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

I love this and I voted it up and beautiful.


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Ahh, youth - such optimism...

Beautiful..

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